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  1. 12-05-2011, 04:42 PM #1
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    cute Teer jiske seene se gujer ke jayega."Jafer Bahdur"

    Teer tera jiske seene se guzer ker jayega
    Aap jayega guzer, per dil mai ghar ker jayega.

    Wo maqame aish hai duniya ki yaan se jeete ji
    Kaun jaata hai, ger jayega, mer ke jayega.

    Chupke-chupke nala (Rona) kab seene se
    jayega nikal,
    Jayega jis waqt, ye sab ko khaber ker jayega.

    Imtehan kerti nahin mohabbat ka, parvane se shama
    Ger khaber hoti ki khairaat is kader ker jayega.

    Ker gaya ger ek tabbasum baag mai aaker wo gul
    Dekhna gunche ke 100 tukre, jiger ker jayega.

    Jazba-e-dil kheench he laiga us khudkaam
    (matlabi) ko,
    Kaam apna ek in yeh, A 'Zafer' ker jayega.
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  2. 13-05-2011, 12:44 AM #2
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    Default Re: Teer jiske seene se gujer ke jayega."Jafer Bah

    nice




    Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!
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  3. 13-05-2011, 09:34 AM #3
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    Default Re: Teer jiske seene se gujer ke jayega."Jafer Bah

    Shukriya ST aapne Jafer
    saheb ki likhi Ghazal ko tavazzo
    di and Saraha. Dersal ye ghazal
    maine MK ke main present ki thi
    per ek Sher " Imtehan kerti nahin
    mohabbat ka, pervane se shamma,
    ger khaber hoti ki khairaat is kader
    ker jayega.
    Ye Sher main likhna bhool gaya tha, tabhi
    ye Ghazal MK se SOS me move kerde. Aaj kal
    bari sakhti chal rahi hai. Kadam phoono-phoonk
    ke chalna hai. Ye Sher maine abhi he milaya hai
    ST please read it now. So nice.
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  4. 16-05-2011, 01:43 AM #4
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    Default Re: Teer jiske seene se gujer ke jayega."Jafer Bah

    Very Nice
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