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  1. 09-06-2011, 08:36 PM #1
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    cute Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    Mujhe Azmane Wale Mujhe Azman ke Roye
    Meri Dastane Hasrat Suna Suna ke Roye

    Teri Bewafaiyon Par, Teri Kaj Adaiyon Par
    Kabhi Sar chupa Ke Roye, Kabhi Munh Chupa Ke Roye

    Jo Sunai Anjuman Men Shab-e- Gham Ki Aab-biti
    Kabhi Ro ke Muskaraye, Kabhi Muskara Ke Roye

    Main Hun Be-Watan Musafir, Mera Naam Bekasi Hai
    Mera Koi Bhi Nahin Hai Jo Gale Laga Ke Roye

    Mere Paas Se Guzar Kar Mera Haal Tak Na Poocha
    Main Yeh Kaise Maan Jaun Ke Woh Door Ja ke Roye
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  2. 09-06-2011, 08:40 PM #2
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    ahan nice
    tumblr na75iuW2tl1rkm3u0o1 500 - Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    Hum kya hain
    Hmari Muhabatayn kya hain
    kya chahtay hain
    kya patay hain..

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    Default Re: Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    bht khub
    very nice shairing
    last line ma
    woh door ja ker roya
    door ma 'r' missing hai

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    cute Re: Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    Quote Originally Posted by Precious Pearl View Post
    ahan nice
    Shukriya Pearl,
    aapne hamari pesh ki ghazal ko
    baariqi se gaur kiya aur tavazzo
    di aur tahe dil se daad. Bahut acha laga
    kaderdani ka.. So nice.
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    Shukriya Anna aapne
    Ghazal ko psand kiya
    kuch likhna reh gaya tha
    wo maine add ker diya hai.
    so nice. Bye.
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    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Mujhe aazmane wale aazmate roye.

    bohat acha hain aur app ki urdu kitni achi hain aap ki posts say pata chalta hain
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