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  1. 23-10-2011, 01:52 AM #1
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    Default raqs karnay ka mila hukam

    [SIZE=5 <div id=]raqs karnay ka mila hukam jo daryaon main
    ham ne khush ho k bhanwar bandh liye paon main

    un ko bhi hai kisi bheegay huway manzar ki talash
    boond tak bou na sakay jo kabhi sehraon main

    aye mere hamsafro tum bhi thakay haray ho
    dhoop ki tum to milawat na karo chaaon main

    jo bhi aata hai btata hai naya koi elaaj
    but na jaye tera beemar maseehaaon main

    hosala kis main hay yousuf ki Kharidari ka
    ab to mehangai ke charche hain zulaikhaon main

    jis barhaman ne kaha hai k ye saal achha hai
    us ko dafnaao mere hath kii lakeeron main

    wo Khuda hai kisi tootay huway dil main ho ga
    masjidon main usay dhoondho na kaliisaaon main

    ham ko aapas main muhabbat nahi karnay daity
    ek yehi aaib hai is shehar k daanaon main

    mujh se karte hain "Qateel" is liye kuch log hasad
    kyon k meray shair hain maqbool haseenaon main     [/SIZE]



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  2. 23-10-2011, 02:52 AM #2
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    nyc 1...........
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  3. 23-10-2011, 02:59 AM #3
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    thank you resham



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    Nice Sharing......




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  5. 23-10-2011, 02:27 PM #5
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    thank you seven tiles



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  6. 24-10-2011, 05:39 PM #6
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    raqs karnay ka mila hukam jo daryaon main




    iss dilkash Ghazal se mustafeez farmaane kaa shukriyah aur saath saath tawajjoh bhee farmaa'iye iss shEr kee jaanib

    jis barhaman ne kaha hai k ye saal achha hai
    us ko dafnaao mere hath kii lakeeron main

    iss meN jo lafz lakeeron hai woh ma'Anee ke aitbaar se durust hai magar Ghazal ke qawaafee ke aitbaar se durust naheeN hai ise aise honaa chaahiye aur agar aap janaab QATEEL SHIFAI SaaHeb kee aSl Ghazal ko dekheN tow aise hee hai jo maiN aap kee Khidmat meN pesh kar rhaa hooN

    jis barahman ne kahaa hai ke yeh saal achhaa hai
    us ko dafnaa'ow mere haath kii rekhaa'oN meN

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    Nice



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  8. 25-10-2011, 12:49 AM #8
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    Default Re: raqs karnay ka mila hukam

    Quote Originally Posted by Ismail Ajaz View Post
    iss dilkash Ghazal se mustafeez farmaane kaa shukriyah aur saath saath tawajjoh bhee farmaa'iye iss shEr kee jaanib

    jis barhaman ne kaha hai k ye saal achha hai
    us ko dafnaao mere hath kii lakeeron main

    iss meN jo lafz lakeeron hai woh ma'Anee ke aitbaar se durust hai magar Ghazal ke qawaafee ke aitbaar se durust naheeN hai ise aise honaa chaahiye aur agar aap janaab QATEEL SHIFAI SaaHeb kee aSl Ghazal ko dekheN tow aise hee hai jo maiN aap kee Khidmat meN pesh kar rhaa hooN

    jis barahman ne kahaa hai ke yeh saal achhaa hai
    us ko dafnaa'ow mere haath kii rekhaa'oN meN

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    g bhai bilkul theek kaha aap ne
    ye aisay hi hay
    mujhse mistake huwi hay
    thanks for pointing out
    and thanks for liking



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  9. 25-10-2011, 01:07 AM #9
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    Default Re: raqs karnay ka mila hukam

    thank you zindagi for liking



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    Quote Originally Posted by love4all View Post
    g bhai bilkul theek kaha aap ne
    ye aisay hi hay
    mujhse mistake huwi hay
    thanks for pointing out
    and thanks for liking
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