Akhtar Sheerani (for competition)

[DexteR]

[Vampire]

zabardast

[*Anaya*]

w.slam
alaaaaaaaaaaaaa hai
poetry bhi achi ha
bus font kuch xaida chota ni o gaya ya mairi eyeside khab o gae hai

[LoViNg IrFaN]

walaikum assalam

bhtttttttttttt khuuuuuuuuuuuuub

[DexteR]

w.slam
alaaaaaaaaaaaaa hai
poetry bhi achi ha
bus font kuch xaida chota ni o gaya ya mairi eyeside khab o gae hai

image k oper jo yellow bar hai usko click kero zoom ho jaye ga

[Hijaab]

not impressive.
frame is blurry.
text is small and BG work is very ordinary, expecially sharp green is not giving fine look.
title per to koi work he nahi kiya
sare negative comments hein
frame mein jo new look di hai woh achi lagi and frame bhi acha hai

[DexteR]

not impressive.
frame is blurry.
text is small and BG work is very ordinary, expecially sharp green is not giving fine look.
title per to koi work he nahi kiya
sare negative comments hein
frame mein jo new look di hai woh achi lagi and frame bhi acha hai

Thanks.
If you think the frame is blurry, take a wash cloth and clean your screen

I am using 40pt font with a resolution of 80 dpi which is bigger than what I normally use.

[veedoo]

frame is good bg acha nahi laga text teek hai not bad
buhat achi koshsh keep it up

[Hijaab]

Thanks.
If you think the frame is blurry, take a wash cloth and clean your screen

I am using 40pt font with a resolution of 80 dpi which is bigger than what I normally use.

Or I might need to clean my glasses lenses
Well, its not about the "number" of the text, it should look bigger when you use it and where you use it.
I only give you detailed comments because I think you may would like to do even better

[~Maliha~]

wahhh aalaa
very nice poetry