شاعری سیکھیں

[Cute Ruba]

us ne samjha bhi nahi,aur na samajhna chaha
Umer guzrey gi sada bus inhi khayalon main

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Main tumhey zindagi nahi kehta

[dreamer]

kaafi arsay baad sd pr aana huwa,,shairi sekhain ki post dekh kr khushgwaar hayrat hoi,,kay chalo koi to hay dasht men been bjanay wala,,
boht achi koshish hay,,isay jaari rahna chahiye,,
jahaa,n tak shaa,iri seekhnay sikhaanay ki baat hay ,shaa,iri baqaol hijaab waqae nahi seekhi jaati,albatta sha,iri kay oazaan seekhay sikhaaiy jaatay hain,mujhay post parrh kr andaza huwa kay shaa,iri sikhaanay walay ko abhi khud oazaan seekhnay ki zroorat hay,,
koi jumla uswqt tak sher nahi hosakta jb tak wo wazn men na ho,,mohtarma ribba nay giraah lagaae to boht khoob hay magar wazn kaheen kaheen kam hogaya hay,,,
mera mashwara ye hay kay sikhanay kay kaam ka aaghaaz khud achi tarha seekhnay kay baad krna chahiye, wrna is tarha fourm ka waqaar dao pr lagnay khadsha hay,,,

[dreamer]

us ne samjha bhi nahi,aur na samajhna chaha
Umer guzrey gi sada bus inhi khayalon main

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Main tumhey zindagi nahi kehta

us ne samjha bhi nahi,aur na samajhna chaha.....ye misra bilkul sahi wazn pr,sahi bahr men hay,,is misray ki bahr hay
faa,ilaatun fa,ilaatun failaatun felun
magar misraa e saani bahr say kharij hay,misra e saani bahr men yoon hoga
umr guzray gi sada in hi khayaalon kay saath,,,,

sher kay liye misra diya gaya hay,, men tumhen zindagi nahi kahta,,, is misray ki bahr ,,,faa,ilaatun mfaa,ilun felun... hay.... men nay post parrhi kuch doston nay is pr baat bhi ki hay,,magar tanqeed say barrh kar tameer ka pahlo hay is post men or wo ye kay sher ki taraf raghbat,sher say mohabbat ka izhaar hay,so mubarikbad pesh krta hon
aap ki hosla afzaai men kuch filbadee sher hazir e khidmat hain....

tum jo kuch ho wohi nahi kahta
men tumhen zindagi nahi kahta

kahta rahta hon janay men kiya kiya
baat dil ki kabhi nahi kahta

shahr hay parsaaon say aabaad
sach yehaan pr koi nahi kahta

baat bhaati nahi jo dil ko zubair
men usay shaairi nahi kahta

[Cute Ruba]

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Ek ishq ka gham aafat aur us pe ye dil aafat

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