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    sdebtk - شاعری سیکھیں
    Assalam o Alaikum

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    Umeed hai aap sub khariyat sey hongey

    757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں
    Jee mere pyare pyare SD frnds .. jesa k aap sub jaantey hain k Main aik shaira hun Ziyada achi shaira tou nahi but phir bhi thora bohat likh he leti hun aur chahti hun k hamarey SD k baki memberz bhi ye koshish karen ta k is thread k zariye Sachii DOsti ko kuch achey aur behtareen shura mil saken

    757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں

    Aaj main yahan mojod hun Ap sub ko shairi sikhaney leken ye tabhi mumkin hosakta hai jub aap sub memberz is thread main interest lain n dil sey participate karen Insha'Allah ye thread apke ander mojod huner ko zaror nikharey ga

    757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں
    Now kum tou da point.. yahan karna ye hai k aik original shair ka pehla misra diya jaye ga n aaney waley member ko dosra misra apni taraf sey bana kar shair ko complete karna hai n next member k liye kisi original shair ka pehla misra chor jana hai
    757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں757794p2mhlhr1i7 - شاعری سیکھیں
    For example Aik original shair hai

    ZINDAGI JUB BHI KISI SHAY KI TALAB KARTI HAI
    MERE HONTON PE TERA NAAM MACHAL JATA HAI


    Now main is shair ka pehla misra doni like

    ZINDAGI JUB BHI KISI SHAY KI TALAB KARTI HAI

    Aur iska second misra apni taraf sey banana hoga next member ko bus thori si koshish darkaar hoti hai.. misra toota phoota bhi huwa tou chaley ga kyun k isi sey agey chal kar apki islah hogi

    Now em completing that for eg

    187841zzukfm12dl - شاعری سیکھیں
    ZINDAGI JUB BHI KISI SHAY KI TALAB KARTI HAI
    Tu he aa jata hai mere hasee'n khayalon main

    187841zzukfm12dl - شاعری سیکھیں

    Jee tou umeed hai k aap log samjh gaye hongey k yahan kya karna hai..
    N plzz No Hesitation at all pehla misra parh kar jo khayal zehan main aata hai usko tarteeb deker dosra misra likh dijiye

    NOTE: Shair complete karney k bad next misra dena na bholiye.. n next misra apni taraf ka nahi hona chahiye bal k kisey original shair ka hona chahiye

    Misra Mulahiza Farmaiye n apna huner dikha kar complete kijiye

    FAQAT TUM SEY MOHABBAT HE TOU KI THI

    Charming Doxt

    Cute Ruba

    sdebtk - شاعری سیکھیں








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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں

    FAQAT TUM SEY MOHABBAT HE TOU KI THI
    q jalte hue sehra mai muje chor gae??

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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں

    original>>>>>Behtar yehi hai zikr e mohabat na cherye

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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں


    Behtar yehi hai zikr e mohabat na cherye
    Is Lafz sey apney hazarun zakhm hain jurey




    next

    Dil lagi dil ki lagi khail hai zamaney ka

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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں

    WALEKUM ASLAAM,
    thread ka title " shairy seekheiN " dekha to khushi huyi ke shaaid hameiN bhi kuch seekhney ko mil jaaye,lekin yahaaN to taba aazmaayi ki da.awat di ja rahi hai,
    kheir.......salaamat rahiye.
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by ishtiaq zain View Post
    WALEKUM ASLAAM,
    thread ka title " shairy seekheiN " dekha to khushi huyi ke shaaid hameiN bhi kuch seekhney ko mil jaaye,lekin yahaaN to taba aazmaayi ki da.awat di ja rahi hai,
    kheir.......salaamat rahiye.
    Arey jub aap aik misra khud sey banana seekh jaingey tou rafta rafta pori ghazal bhi likh payengey... koshish karney main harj he kya hai.
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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں

    Quote Originally Posted by cute ruba View Post
    arey jub aap aik misra khud sey banana seekh jaingey tou rafta rafta pori ghazal bhi likh payengey... Koshish karney main harj he kya hai.
    لیکن ایک مصرعبØ+ر Ú©Û’ اندر ہونا چاہیے، اس سے بØ+ور تو نہیں سیکھیں جائیں گی۔


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    Quote Originally Posted by Bilal Azam View Post
    لیکن ایک مصرعبØ+ر Ú©Û’ اندر ہونا چاہیے، اس سے بØ+ور تو نہیں سیکھیں جائیں گی۔
    Insan koshish karey tou kya kuch nahi hosakta
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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں

    Quote Originally Posted by cute ruba View Post
    insan koshish karey tou kya kuch nahi hosakta
    ٹھیک کہا ہے، Ú©Ù„ میں ایک کتاب کا لنک دوں گا، جس میں بØ+ور Ú©Û’ بارے میں ہی بتایا گیا ہے۔ یہیں پوسٹ کر دو Úº گا، نئے شعراء Ú©Û’ لئے بہت فائدہ مند ہے۔


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    Default Re: شاعری سیکھیں


    i was excited as sir Zain
    jo loug shyri kerna chahein woh taba azmaye ker sakte hein.
    lekin shayri ko sahi likhe aur khne ke rules to seekhe ja sakte hein, waise shayri nahi seekhi jaati

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