Urdu Shairy ka Review

[Yasir]

Assalam-o-Alaikum!

My First Sharing Here.... Is main Jo Bheegi Palkain ka zikar hay unko aap jantay hi hain.. captain midnight unka nick hay yahan

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Welcome Yasir bhot khushi hui aap ko yha per dekh kar Umeed hay k aap k Tanz-o-Mazah ka jadu Sachi Dosti mai bhi barkraar rahay ga

Nehyat hi khubsuart sharing ki hay aap nay

daad qabool kijya

FeamnAllah

[Yasir]

yahan bhi u ki wahi aadat hay... dosroon ka salam ignore karny ki...

pasand karny ka shukryaa

agar ijaazat ho to apni puraani tehreerain bhi yahan share kar doon ?

[naz]

walaikum salam

bhot he umda likha hia or aik urse bad itni mazahiyan tehrer parhne ko mili hia

jee Yasir app apni purani kiya naye sub tehrerain share karsakte hain

waise wo shair


maine itne love letter post kiye wala

or charpaye charpaye

Beautiful sharing

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Apni purani kiya janab jo jo hy aap yha share karya yha Mashalah aap ko bhot Baazouq sathi milay gy

Bhai mai nay aap ko pahaly bhi kha hy , k Assalam-o-Alikum jo hay jawab bhi hota hy

FeamnAllah

[Yasir]

Thankss Naaz & BP

[~AawarA~]

hmm...!!!
wah yasir sahab kiya zabardast mazahiya tehreer likhi hai aap ne...!!!
aur waqai aik lambey aersey k baad koi mazahiya tehreer perhney ko milli hai...!!!
esey hi likhtey rahen aur qehqahey aur muskarahten baanttey rahen...!!!
khush rahen...

[Yasir]

Thankss awaara.. aapka nick aisa hay k dil kar raha hay is per bhi aik essay likhooon

[naz]

Thankss awaara.. aapka nick aisa hay k dil kar raha hay is per bhi aik essay likhooon

nick per essay

acha irada hai

[○Ρịйk○]

yasir sahab jab say aapki kuch tehreerain parhi hain
main to aapki fan hogai hon. kia khub likhty hain MasahAllah
jab main ne apki tehreer pehli bar parhi to yaqeen karain hasty hasty
apni chair say gir gai thi jis main aap ne bp ki poetry k bary main bataya
tha. umeed karti hon k aap yonhe likhty rahain gay. aapki tehreeron
ka intezar rahyga khush rahain