yh yaha kesy aa gai
thanks
lagaye hai tu aye hai
SD ki Basanti
Chal DhanoOo
I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....
Heer bohat umda likha hai
aap ki taraf say aur sharings ka intizar rahey ga
shuro mein tou bohat he umda aur zabaradst hai
lekin last mein jo shidat aur deepness honi chaiye woh nahi hai
kuch aur try karein last lines mein, aur behtar ho ja'ay ga
Masha Allah bahot umda
aha
bht zbrdst hai..
heer ki sari poetry may say yeh sab say fav hai meri