Haddd Hoottii haii Yarrrrr.........

[sweet.kiran]

real life mai b kuch kuch aesa hota hia...Kuch kuch bole to 5 %


warna in kahaniyon mai just fazoliyat he hoti hian.....bila waja larke larkiyan apne khubon mai rehte hian unhe b koi aesa he chaye hota hia.jo k real life mai nai milte

[~HaAni~]

u ne kisi new writer ko parha ho ga warna inhi digest me publish hone wale novels aj kal har tv channel pe onlne ho rhe hai kitni female writers hain jo achi khasi famous hain sab female writers ko criticise karna acha nhi

[Vampire]

Walaikumusalam

sq bhaiyya scene ki khaal utaar di ap ne
wesey ap ki explanation se aur b mazay ka scene ban geya

kahani kahani hoti hai sach se kiya lena dena uska

[asif971]

Writer ne lafzon se khailne ki koshish ki
lekin nakami hui
Disaster U can say

& for Ur way of criticizing

[sarfraz_qamar]

tahir javed waqae awesome
pichle dino me ny Alim ul haq haqqi ki tehrer parhi Isme Azam class thi bohat e umda
jee zrur parhye ga i hope adab k kadar dan hony k naty ap ko Umaira Ahmad ka andaz zrur bhay ga

Allemul hakk hakkii kaa writting style sabb sayy different haii,unn kii takreebann sarii stories main nayy parhiii hoii hainnn....
main too urdu adab ka adna saa talibb e illmm hooo,ap kay kehnay parr zaror try karoo gaa umera ahmadd kooooo

[sarfraz_qamar]

han beshak mashary me sudhar nahi ay ga.. par mashary ka hissa zrur hen ye kiu k ye to sakafat ki trah hai chahe heer ranjha ho ya sohni mahival, in ko rivayat krny ka maqsad afsanvi lazzat paida krna yakenan nahi hai bl k btana hai k kuch na mukammal sy wakiat aesy be hoskty hen insani zindagi me,
for understanding Point of view

aorr hamaray writerz koo hamaray culture koo kuchh iss tarah dikhana chahiehyy jiss sayy moasharray maon honay wallii naa insafiyann samnnay aa jainn,sathh main aik aisa strong message b hoo jooo parhnay walloo main positive change laa sakkayyy,,amoomann bht kamm umarr main hii larkiyan iss type kay diagests parhnaa shoroo karr dettii hain,unn ka zehan kachaa hotaa haii,aorr yehii umarr bann nnay aorr bigarnay kii b haii....

bas yehii point of view haii iss na cheze kaaa

[sarfraz_qamar]

Walaikum Asalam

had ho gayi hai sach mei

kahaniya jo banti wo hamare ass pass se hi rehti hain..bas lafzo mei is tarah dhala va hota k lagta hai k esa to ho hi nai sakta.....
nd is secne ko chor k in dono ki jo kahani thi may be sach ho.....itni barri duniya hai kisi k saath to ye waqiya paish aya hi ho ga..tabhi to writter ko ye khayal aya...bas jo kahani hai wese hi likh do to maza nai ata is liye lafzo ko idhr udhr kar dete k interest banna rahe

balkeh hadd kayy aaggay kandd hoo gaii haiiii

kahaniyan writerzz kii observation ka aksss hotii hain,agarr inn tehreeroo kayy zarieyy,bajaieyy iss type kayy chawala kisam kay scene create karnay kayy koii achaa saa message hoo yaa phirr kiisii moashartii Burraii koo sabb kayy samnayy layaa giyaa hoo,wohh behtarr haiiii

[sarfraz_qamar]

real life mai b kuch kuch aesa hota hia...Kuch kuch bole to 5 %


warna in kahaniyon mai just fazoliyat he hoti hian.....bila waja larke larkiyan apne khubon mai rehte hian unhe b koi aesa he chaye hota hia.jo k real life mai nai milte

just 5 percent nay kiaa teerr maarr laina haiii...

aorr aappkii baatt kuch hadd takk theekk haii kehh real life main inn kahanioun jaisayy larkayy yaa larkiyan milnaa mushkill balkehh naa mumkin haii,,meraa khial hai kehh inn tehreeroo kayy zarieyy moashartii biggarr koo samnnay layaa jaa sakta haii,aorr positive messages kayy zarieyy kacahy zehnooo kii rahh nummaii kii jaa sakti haiii

[sarfraz_qamar]

u ne kisi new writer ko parha ho ga warna inhi digest me publish hone wale novels aj kal har tv channel pe onlne ho rhe hai kitni female writers hain jo achi khasi famous hain sab female writers ko criticise karna acha nhi

main nayy joo parhaa haii just ussayy criticise kiaa haiiii

joo achaa haii wohh achaa hii haii aorr joo ghalltt hoo gaa uss koo ghaltt kehnay kaa hakk too bantaa hii haiii,jahan takk achii writers ka tallak haii unn kii tadadd aattay main namakk kayy barabarr haii,Diagests main issii type ka literature chapp raha haii,aorr aisaa litereture kachayy zehnoo parr negative assratt hii choorrayy gaaaaaa

[sarfraz_qamar]

Walaikumusalam

sq bhaiyya scene ki khaal utaar di ap ne
wesey ap ki explanation se aur b mazay ka scene ban geya

kahani kahani hoti hai sach se kiya lena dena uska

bhaiyaa jii itnaa toooo hakk bantaa hiii haiiii

kahan kahannii hii hotii haii magarr kahanii sayy aikk achaa message bhii milnaa chahieyy,jiss age main larkiyan iss type ki stories parhtii hain,aapp bakhoobii andazzaa lagaa saktay hain keh unn kayy zehan parr kitnayy negative asrratt hotay hooo gayyy