Khuwaish

[SiLenT ScReaM]

Iss se Pahlay kay Shaam Dhal jayee
Koi subah Mere Naam kar Do

Bohat Khizaan ne muj ko Lota hey
Sari Baharain Mere Naam kar do

Ye Kalyaan,phool ye Raaniyon kay jo Un Paiker
Apne Jazbon ki Tamaam Tar Sachaiyaan
Gar ho sakay tou mere Naam kar do

Meri khuwaish Mera Dum Naa Lai lain
Simat kar Naa Rah jayee Aankhon main Dum

Iss se pahlay.....

Iss se pahlay kay Dum Nikal jayee
Mera tum aakhiri kaam kar do

Apne Dil ki dharkan mere naam kar do
Aisa Naa ho kay Shaam Dhal jayee....

[withlove]

khoob janab.. nazm kehnay ki achi koshish rahi .. ik tarap thi.. yunhi mehnat se likhty rahiye.. aur bhi nikhar aaye ga.. daad qabool kijiye.. Shukria..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

[~*Heer*~]

bht khoob likha hy .....

[~*zaib*~]

nice dear

[ArAbIaN gIrL]

bohat khub

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[naz]

achi koshish hai or baki sub poetry main yeh zaida achi hai

[~*~Mehar~*~]

wah bht khoob.....bht achi feeling hai iss may

udasi b hai , hope b hai, intazar b hai..

zbrdst

[primitive]

wah janab jazbon ki sachai say saji hoi aik khobsorat nazam boht khoob likha kush rahin or likhtay rahain

[Wasi Anjum]

Bahoot khoobsurat poetry
nice one

[SiLenT ScReaM]

Thanx aap sab ka k aap sab ne pasand ki aur meri hosla afzaii ki