Iss main mind karnay ki kia baat hay Kiran jee, agar 6 lafzoon ko 100% main divide karain tou yeh lines 83.33% aik shayeri line say miltii hain not 99.9% kiyonki pehla hurf SAATH hatta kar main nay LAMS kardiya
Ab aisay scenario main, meri wazahat mundarjazayl hay:
1. Hum shaa'yeri say inspired hotay hain tou waisay hi alfaaz apnay opper munsalik kartay hain jaisay kabhi kabhi kuch sha'ayeri paRh kar humain aisa mehsoos hota hay kay yeh sha'ayeri shayed hum per hi likhii gayii hay, tou bas jab yeh tasweer dekhii tou foran zehan main yehi lines aayiin jo main nay likh diin.
2. Ab yeh 100% tou naa shaair ki hain aur na hi 100% meri, barhaal iss main jiddat tou main nay kii hay (sha'air sahab say mazrat kay saath
3. Ab jab main yeh lukh chuka hoon aur aap nay issay APPROVE bhi nahin kia tou main tou 'results' kay aanay say pehlay hi 'disqualify' hogaya, kyonki according to the rule, aik member srif aik hi entry kar sakta hay
4. Ab aap phir keh dain, kitna kam bolte ho tum




Quote Originally Posted by sweet.kiran View Post

sorry dear but apki ye line aek poetry ki first line se 99.9% milti hai to plz kindly ap as ko change kar den,koi or line likh le,,umeed hai mind nai karo ge