Barish

[Chandbhai]

Tup tup,
Boondein gir rahi hein,
Tuk tuk,
Garri par takraeen hein,
Tup tup,
Sarruk ko bhigo rahi hein,
Tuk tuk,
Cheezein urr rahi hein,
Tup tup,
Khushbuen bhali hein,
Tuk tuk,
Jazbaton ko utha rahi hein,
Tup tup,
Sharboor ho gae hein,
Tuk tuk,
Asman o suraj muskra rahei hein,
Tup tup,
Sub khushian mana rahei hein!

[thefire1]

bohat hi saaday aur masoomaana alfaaz hain aap kay @Chandbhai;

khuloos say bharay yeh alfaaz bhalay lagtay hain, bas rabt paida karain.... good work, keep it up.

[Chandbhai]

Thanks yaar..bus eise hi dil karta hai to likh deita hoon..but not so good

[thefire1]

its ok, keep it up, you expressions are very TRUE.... we feel it here, trust me

[Zindagi]

vry nice

[Chandbhai]

Thanks to both

[*jamshed*]

umda

[Chandbhai]

Jazak Allah