Dhoondo gey kahan Mujh ko ? Lo mera Pata le lo,
Ek Qabr naee ho gi, Ek jalta dia ho ga !!!
bhot khob
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Walaikum Assalaam
ALLAH na karay aisay dhoondna paRay.... ALLAH SWT aap ko sehat kay saath zindagi ata karay AMEEN SUM AMEEN
Kabhi kabhi hum sha'ayeri kay intikhaab main kuch ziyada hi 'emotional' ho jaatay hain aur iss baat ka khayal bhi nahin rehta kay kia likha jaa raha hay yaa khayal reh kar bhi aisa likhna acha lagta hay, which is not right... its you choice but honestly I didnt like it.. and I am sure you wont mind it khush rahyeh
haha mainy aik shair laga diya aur ap itnay emotional ho gaye
Main to bohaat sari poetry share karti hun,ab sab kuch mujhy pe apply thori hota hay
personally mujhay aisey khooni type ashaar pasnd nai hain bt ye shair parha to mujhay bohaat real laga aur poet ki halat sochi mainy to laga diya yahan simple
Aray nai mind kyun karun gi main
ap b khush rahein
Last edited by Hidden words; 25-12-2013 at 02:54 AM.
ღ∞ ι ωιll αlωαуѕ ¢нσσѕє уσυ ∞ღ
Wah wah boht khoob
,,,ÙˆÛÛŒ تو سب سے Ø²ÛŒØ§Ø¯Û ÛÛ’ Ù†ÙÚ©ØªÛ Ú†Ùیں میرا
..!!!â€Ø¬Ùˆ Ù…Ùسکرا Ú©Û’ ÛÙ…ÛŒØ´Û Ú¯Ù„Û’ لگائے مجھے
Walaikumusalam
aisa khatarnaak pata
shair acha hai