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    Default Writer's club compition january...

    ASSLAM-O-ALAIKUM

    tamaam doston ko khush amdeed




    iss maheene men ap logon ki pasand ka topic lai hun

    yani sab ko naye saal pe kuch na kuch likhna hai

    chahe wo iqtabas,afsana ya koi khubsurat bat ho k ap new year kese

    manate hen ya kuch logon ki tara nai manate tu is ki wajah byan kren



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    Quote Originally Posted by thefire1 View Post
    Assalaam-O-alaikum

    2014 ki aamad hay yaani 'Tera Gaya' chalain iss baar iss topic per aik nazm likhta hoon... apnay hi andaaz main, aur mukhtalif shouba-e-hayaat say taaluq rakhnay waaloon ki soch bayan karta hoon yeh rahii meri entry...!


    NAYA SAAL

    Ghareeb Awam!
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Joon ka tuu hay hum per mehngayii ka azaab
    Ameeron kay yonhi hain band, hum per baab
    Yoonhi sehtay hain hum iss zindagi kay ataab
    Terii aamad ka phir yeh sab charcha kia hay
    Teray aanay yaa jaanay say badla kia hay

    Politicans
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Yonhii karta hoon qatal rozz apnay zameer ka
    Yonhii chamcha bana rehta hoon wazeer ka
    Badshah aaj bhi hoon main apni taqreer ka
    Srif hindsay kay badalnay say hota kia hay
    Teray aanay yaa jaanay say badla kia hay

    Aashiq (Sachay waalay)
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Wohi shab-o-roz ka tanhayii main rona mera
    Wohi gham-e-ishq main jaltay huway sona mera
    Wohi deedar ki khuwahish main taRapna mera
    Saal badanlay ka bhala yeh silsila kia hay
    Teray aanay yaa jaanay say badla kia hay

    Aashiq (dil phaink meray type )
    Aiy nayay saal teray aanay main Naya kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay
    Wohi humara shab-o-roz ishq main khuwar hona
    Kabhi sandal tou kabhi danday ka shikar hona
    Kabhi College, kabhi Uni, Kabhi office main pyar hona
    Yeh aashiq, teray badalnay say sudhra kia hay
    Teray aanay ya jaanay say badla kia hay


    Abhi abhi likhi hay, ghaltii ki paishgii maazrat Enjoy
    bohat achi hai specially ghareeb awaam i wish k ye shamil ho jaye compitition men coz i don't know the poetry is accepted or not lemme ask the admin
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    jee admin say kahyeh ga kay thefire1 nay tehreer shairaana andaaz main likhii hay pasandeedgi ka shukriya, main tou bila muqablay hi jeet gaya, aap kay comments bohat ma'ainay rakhtay hain khush rahyeh

    Quote Originally Posted by shazia rana View Post

    bohat achi hai specially ghareeb awaam i wish k ye shamil ho jaye compitition men coz i don't know the poetry is accepted or not lemme ask the admin

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