Lovely Poem
Always
© By Brandon A. Swaggerty
The day you were born, the whole world was blessed
These thoughts in my mind to you I must confess
The time has come for me to express my true feelings
You are the center of my thoughts and the essence of my being
What you have brought me I never thought I could procure
The gift of comfort, with you I am secure
For you have lifted me up from a life filled with sorrow
And made me realize there is always a better tomorrow
It amazes me how someone can make me feel this way
I love you more and more with each passing day
You brighten my days and lift my spirits
I have felt this for so long and now want you to hear it
So you may know the place you hold in my heart
You are always with me even when we're apart
I truly believe what we have is meant to be
Just open your heart and soon you shall see
What I am willing to do to keep a smile on your face
Just know that I'm here and will be always
Lovely Poem
walaikum assalaam
if the author is taking about her love of life than he is wrong in stating that whole world was blessed.
he should replace 'the whole' to 'my' which makes some sense... anyways, i am not poet I am just expressing what I feel should be the right approach
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Sweet.......
Very Nice. .........
دل اگر بے نقاب ھوتے
تو سوچو..! کتنے فساد ھوتے
beautiful
کہاں اتنی سزائیں تھیں بھلا اس زندگانی میں
ہزاروں گھر ہوئے روشن جو میرا دل جلا محسنؔ