LAMHON K AZAAB(epi 6)

[shazia rana]

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[attiaahsan]

Thanks for sharing

umda jaa raha hai /up

jari hai dostoon

[thefire1]

bohat khoob madan @shazia rana;

bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer likhii hay.....

aap nay kahani main bhi 'tasaddud' karna nahin chouRa, acha khaasa nayii shirt pehan kar aaya tha bechaaray per 'thapaRoon' ki baarish karwaa dii.....

jokes apart, you have very nice control over expressing each expression, jiss say yeh pata lagaana mushkil nahin hay kay how closely you have personaly felt those emotions.... thanks again, keep writing, I am becoming your fan 'koushaliya jee'

khush rahyeh

[Zain]

Bohat khoob... keep it up

[shazia rana]

bohat khoob madan @shazia rana;

bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer likhii hay.....

aap nay kahani main bhi 'tasaddud' karna nahin chouRa, acha khaasa nayii shirt pehan kar aaya tha bechaaray per 'thapaRoon' ki baarish karwaa dii.....

jokes apart, you have very nice control over expressing each expression, jiss say yeh pata lagaana mushkil nahin hay kay how closely you have personaly felt those emotions.... thanks again, keep writing, I am becoming your fan 'koushaliya jee'

khush rahyeh

bohat shukriah sukhbeer singh wo isliye kerwai k wo ye shirt apne dost ko de de q k us ki nazar hai us pe or wo mera hamsaya hai so hamsayon k kuch tu huqooq poore kerne chahiyen
paen ainian tareefan na karya karo bachi ko hor nai j likhiya jana

[shazia rana]

Bohat khoob... keep it up

thanx larrke

[shazia rana]

Thanks for sharing

umda jaa raha hai /up

jari hai dostoon

sorry meri nazar nai parri ap pe shukriah pasandeedgi or jari hai likhne ka

[thefire1]

ab poohcyeh kay main kiyon itna hans raha hoon

bohat shukriah sukhbeer singh wo isliye kerwai k wo ye shirt apne dost ko de de q k us ki nazar hai us pe or wo mera hamsaya hai so hamsayon k kuch tu huqooq poore kerne chahiyen
paen ainian tareefan na karya karo bachi ko hor nai j likhiya jana

[shazia rana]

ab poohcyeh kay main kiyon itna hans raha hoon

chaddo

[thefire1]

chaddd ditta

chaddo