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  1. 13-02-2014, 06:42 PM #1
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    bohaat kamal likha dear
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    بہت خوب،بہت عمدہ۔۔۔میں شاعری Ú©Û’ اصولوں سے واقف نہیں ہوں،البتہ Ù¾Ú‘Ú¾Ù†Û’ Ú©ÛŒ Ø+د تک شوق رکھتا ہوں۔
    یہ ایک مصرعہ آپ Ù†Û’ لکھا ہے۔۔۔Ø+الانکہ درمیان ہیں آسمان سات۔۔۔۔۔۔۔مجھ Û’ لگا کہ یہاں،درمیاں اور آسماں،ہونا چاہئے
    تھے یعنی Ù† غُنا کا استعمال،مجھے Ù…Ø+ض ایسا لگا،باقی قوائد سے میں ہرگز واقف نہیں ہوں۔

    یہ جو آخری شعر ہے اسکی وضاØ+ت اگر کر دیں تو اچھا ہوگا۔
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    Zabardast likhi magar Ye akhri shair hmain khatak raha hai sis................ Na uski thi ye oqat ...????
    Agar ap mafhoom bta dain to munasib rahy ga


    ,,,وہی تو سب سے زیادہ ہے نُکتہ چِیں میرا
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    vry nice....



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  9. 15-02-2014, 04:37 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by King Kong View Post
    بہت خوب،بہت عمدہ۔۔۔میں شاعری Ú©Û’ اصولوں سے واقف نہیں ہوں،البتہ Ù¾Ú‘Ú¾Ù†Û’ Ú©ÛŒ Ø+د تک شوق رکھتا ہوں۔
    یہ ایک مصرعہ آپ Ù†Û’ لکھا ہے۔۔۔Ø+الانکہ درمیان ہیں آسمان سات۔۔۔۔۔۔۔مجھ Û’ لگا کہ یہاں،درمیاں اور آسماں،ہونا چاہئے
    تھے یعنی Ù† غُنا کا استعمال،مجھے Ù…Ø+ض ایسا لگا،باقی قوائد سے میں ہرگز واقف نہیں ہوں۔

    یہ جو آخری شعر ہے اسکی وضاØ+ت اگر کر دیں تو اچھا ہوگا۔
    Boht shukriya janab..........ye jo aap aasman or darmeyaan wali baat keh rahay hain ye mene shair me wazan qayam rakhne k liye aise kia hai ta k behr na tutay.................warna baat apki b darust hai janab....ayinda se apki qeemti raye pe amal kia jyga boht shukriya.......or last shair ki apko samajh nahi ai to lijiye me samjhaye deti hu.......
    Ye Ishq-e-Haqiqi b ata karda hai uska
    Rani na to qabil thi na uski thi ye oqaat....!
    Yani ye Allah Ki mohabbat b Allah hi ki ata ki hui hai...warna rani na to is qabil thi or na hi rani ki ye oqaat thi k ALLAH usay Apne ishq se nawazta
    Umeed karti hu k wazahat karne me kamyab ho gai hu....koi doubt ho to dobara puch sakte hain.....muje koi etraaz na hoga.....


    Quote Originally Posted by Arosa Hya View Post
    Zabardast likhi magar Ye akhri shair hmain khatak raha hai sis................ Na uski thi ye oqat ...????
    Agar ap mafhoom bta dain to munasib rahy ga
    Boht shukriya aroosa.....or apko jo cheez khatak rahi hai uski wazahat kiye deti hu....
    Ye Ishq-e-Haqiqi b ata karda hai uska
    Rani na to qabil thi na uski thi ye oqaat....!
    Yani ye Allah Ki mohabbat b Allah hi ki ata ki hui hai...warna rani na to is qabil thi or na hi rani ki ye oqaat thi k ALLAH usay Apne ishq se nawazta
    Umeed karti hu k wazahat karne me kamyab ho gai hu....koi doubt ho to dobara puch sakte hain.....muje koi etraaz na hoga.....
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    Quote Originally Posted by Amna Rani View Post
    Boht shukriya janab..........ye jo aap aasman or darmeyaan wali baat keh rahay hain ye mene shair me wazan qayam rakhne k liye aise kia hai ta k behr na tutay.................warna baat apki b darust hai janab....ayinda se apki qeemti raye pe amal kia jyga boht shukriya.......or last shair ki apko samajh nahi ai to lijiye me samjhaye deti hu.......
    Ye Ishq-e-Haqiqi b ata karda hai uska
    Rani na to qabil thi na uski thi ye oqaat....!
    Yani ye Allah Ki mohabbat b Allah hi ki ata ki hui hai...warna rani na to is qabil thi or na hi rani ki ye oqaat thi k ALLAH usay Apne ishq se nawazta
    Umeed karti hu k wazahat karne me kamyab ho gai hu....koi doubt ho to dobara puch sakte hain.....muje koi etraaz na hoga.....



    Boht shukriya aroosa.....or apko jo cheez khatak rahi hai uski wazahat kiye deti hu....
    Ye Ishq-e-Haqiqi b ata karda hai uska
    Rani na to qabil thi na uski thi ye oqaat....!
    Yani ye Allah Ki mohabbat b Allah hi ki ata ki hui hai...warna rani na to is qabil thi or na hi rani ki ye oqaat thi k ALLAH usay Apne ishq se nawazta
    Umeed karti hu k wazahat karne me kamyab ho gai hu....koi doubt ho to dobara puch sakte hain.....muje koi etraaz na hoga.....
    boht shukriya.......theek ho gaya!


    ,,,وہی تو سب سے زیادہ ہے نُکتہ چِیں میرا
    ..!!!‏جو مُسکرا کے ہمیشہ گلے لگائے مجھے

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