Ishq-e-Haqiqi...!

[shazia rana]

اسم Ø+اضر اور اسم غائب تک بات پہنچ Ú†Ú©ÛŒ ہے۔۔۔۔ہی ہی ہی۔۔۔۔۔میں Ù†Û’ Ù„ÙØ¸Û”Û”Û”Û”Û”Ø§ÙØ³Ú©ÛŒÛ ”Û”Û”Ú©ÛŒ Ø¬Ú¯ÛÛ”Û”Û”Û”ØªÛŒØ±ÛŒÛ”Û”Û ”کیلئے
کہا تھا۔۔۔۔۔تیری ( رانی ) کیلئے جیسے آپ نے۔۔۔اُسکی۔۔۔ استعمال کیا تھا۔

ویسے مجھ سے کیا مشورہ لو گی،میں تو نکما ہوں پرلے درجے کا۔

paen ab apne munh mian mithu tu na banen wese men b ap ki raye se muttafiq hun.

[shazia rana]

Amna Sahiba aap nay buhat khoubsurat likha aur kamal ka likha ...aap nay wazahat bhi kardi iss key halankah main aphlay he samjh gia tha leekin aik mashwara hay kah agar aap dosray misray main uss kay bajay kuch aur (iss waghaira) lagain to ziyada acha lagay ga aur mafhoom wazah hoga keonkah yah Allah ka muamla hay aur pahli dafa parhnay par aik dum mughalta hota hay kah yah kia likh dia ...
Ye Ishq-e-Haqiqi b ata karda hai uss ka
Rani na to qabil thi na he iss ki thi ye oqaat....!

itna painch bannene ki zrurat nai faragh insan bachi wazahat ker chuki hai

[shazia rana]

[B @Amna Rani; keep doing it /up[/B]

[Amna Rani]

ویسے آپ پہلے شعر سے Ù„Û’ کر سیکنڈ لاسٹ شعر تک Ø+اظر رہیں پھر اچانک آخری شعر میں غائب ہو گئٰں Û”Û” کیا یہ کھلا تضاد نہیں? (سہیل وڑائچ صاØ+ب والا سوال)

offffoooo..pata nahi aap log meri baat q nahi samajh rahay ya shayad mujhay hi samjhana nahi aa raha............last shair me mene chunke apna takhallus istemaal kia hai to Ghayebana hi rehna tha na............baqi jo ap ne kaha uss se b agree karti hu....mene ye pehle jiss forum pe share ki thi wahan baray baray shayer mojud hain wahana kisi ne ispe etraaz nahi kia.....lekin aap ke etraz pe b mujhe koi etraaz nahi.....or janab isay khula tazaad mat samjhen ye band tazad hai......
ayinda se apki raye pe amal kia jaye ga janab.....boht shukriya ap ne apna qeemti waqt nikal k apni qeemti raye se nawaza,......ALLAH PAAK apko dheron khushiyan ata farmaye...aameen......

[shazia rana]

offffoooo..pata nahi aap log meri baat q nahi samajh rahay ya shayad mujhay hi samjhana nahi aa raha............last shair me mene chunke apna takhallus istemaal kia hai to Ghayebana hi rehna tha na............baqi jo ap ne kaha uss se b agree karti hu....mene ye pehle jiss forum pe share ki thi wahan baray baray shayer mojud hain wahana kisi ne ispe etraaz nahi kia.....lekin aap ke etraz pe b mujhe koi etraaz nahi.....or janab isay khula tazaad mat samjhen ye band tazad hai......
ayinda se apki raye pe amal kia jaye ga janab.....boht shukriya ap ne apna qeemti waqt nikal k apni qeemti raye se nawaza,......ALLAH PAAK apko dheron khushiyan ata farmaye...aameen......

meri jan ap jesa likhti ho or jesa likhna chahti ho bas likho just mind it that your thoughts shouldn't be silly baqi sab theek hai.

[Amna Rani]

[B @Amna Rani; keep doing it /up[/B]

Janab....ap hi bata dain kya waqai last shair me garbar hai.....mujhay to aisa mahsoos nahi hota...pata nahi sab ko q aisa lag raha hai.....

[Amna Rani]

meri jan ap jesa likhti ho or jesa likhna chahti ho bas likho just mind it that your thoughts shouldn't be silly baqi sab theek hai.

JAZAKALLAH ma,am...so nice of u...
always stay blessed....aameen.......

[shazia rana]

Janab....ap hi bata dain kya waqai last shair me garbar hai.....mujhay to aisa mahsoos nahi hota...pata nahi sab ko q aisa lag raha hai.....

mehsus tu kher mujhe b hua per koi nai

[sannan]

offffoooo..pata nahi aap log meri baat q nahi samajh rahay ya shayad mujhay hi samjhana nahi aa raha............last shair me mene chunke apna takhallus istemaal kia hai to Ghayebana hi rehna tha na............baqi jo ap ne kaha uss se b agree karti hu....mene ye pehle jiss forum pe share ki thi wahan baray baray shayer mojud hain wahana kisi ne ispe etraaz nahi kia.....lekin aap ke etraz pe b mujhe koi etraaz nahi.....or janab isay khula tazaad mat samjhen ye band tazad hai......
ayinda se apki raye pe amal kia jaye ga janab.....boht shukriya ap ne apna qeemti waqt nikal k apni qeemti raye se nawaza,......ALLAH PAAK apko dheron khushiyan ata farmaye...aameen......

unn baray baray shu'ra kay pass chootay chootay shaeron kay liye time he kaha hota hay

[sannan]

itna painch bannene ki zrurat nai faragh insan bachi wazahat ker chuki hai

parh li hay main nay Khar Painch