itni khubsoorat hai
boht boht acha likhti hain aap.
ahaaan very nyc bohaat achi nazm likhi ap ne sis
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yeh baat to mujhey aapsey kehni chahiye thi.. key aap yahan? I mentioned you there that I miss you but aap wahan sey to gaib hi hain.. Achi baat hai key aap yahan per mil gayi. Nice to see you around. world is so small
Ji urdu parhna seekh liya. writing ki bhi practice ho rahi hai.. sirf koi koi lafz, jo pata nahin hai woh parhna mushkil hoti hai.. ab aap yahan sey gaib nahin honeywali to aapsey zaroor poch longa..
Thank you very very much
Last edited by UuLO0oº; 26-02-2014 at 10:48 AM.
boht boht achi poetry hai yeh..Very nice.
sirf aik line theek sey nahin parh saka..
kisi key wasl main kat ti, kisi key hijr main roti
us line key baad wali line koi likho.. do lafz pata nahin mujhey..
Thanks.
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