Writer's club compitition april...

[shazia rana]

asslam-o-alaikum

punjabi ka aik muhawera hai k ai basant te pala udant

per is bar basant tu ai per pala(sardi) udant nai hua

tu is bar ka mozoo b basant he hai...ap logon ne is khubsurat

tehwar pe chand lines likhni hen,mere pas b agar time hua
tu zarur hazri dun gi.

Rules:

Ek member ek hi baar share karay ga
Same aur edit sharing accept nhi hogi
Last date 20/4/2014 hai
Winner 50% poll aur 50% admins decide karen gy.

[shazia rana]

[thefire1]

Aap ko meethi lassi pasand hay,,, aur kisi ki meethi baatain.... bas yeh MITHAAS hii tou hay jo logon ko waha jaanay per majboor kartii hay!!! khayal rakhain PAEN ziyada meetha Sehat kay liye nuqsaanday hota hay

[B @thefire1; paen mujhe khud wahan ki meethi lassi barri pasand hai perrion wali [/B]

[thefire1]

Assalaam-O-alaikum @shazia rana;

Meray khayal hay kay baat ka agar ghalat rukh laina hay tou woh koi hum say seekhay, main nay hi khuwamakhuwa itnay fatway jhaaR diye...

Roshan khayali ki khoobsurat misaaal tou humari qoum day rahii hay kay itna khoobsurat BAHAR kay mousam ko Yaani MOUSAM-E-BAHAR kay sunna bhi khoobsurat lagta hay ko BASANT ka naam dia hua hay aur woh bhi aisa naam jiss ka URDU say koi ta'aluq nahin..... Jab kay HINDU mazhab kay bhawaan RAM ki LELA ki Khadaama ka naam BASANTI thii!!

Aap khusdh sochyeh kay kia BASANT ya Basanat say nikla BASANTII naam agar hum bahar kay saath munsoob karain tou
Gul-Bahar banay ga Gul-Basant ya Gul Basantii
Sada-Bahar banay ga Sada-Basantii
Dil-e-no Bahar banay ga Dil-e-no Basant
Fasl-e-Bahar banay gii fasl-e-basantii

Aisay tou aur bhi bohat say PUNJABI kay mousaam hain, jaisay Saawan bhadoon, Jait, MalhaR, HaaR, Baysaaki waghaira... tou unn sab per bhi TEHWAAR hona banta hay, hum roushan-khayal unn per tou koi tehwaar nahin maanatay tou yeh BASANT per itni meharbaani kiyon
Allama Iqbal, Faiz Ahmed Faiz, Meera Jee, Ustaab Daaman, Habib Jalib, jaisay azeem shora-e-karaam nay apni poori zindagi Punjab main guzaari, unhoon nay tou Urdu aur Punjabi main BAHAR ko BAHAAR ki kaha, main nay tou kahin BASANT nahin paRha, albatta agar aap nay paRha ho tou zaroor meri 'qaleel aur mehdood maloomaat' main izaafa karain.

Haan agar URDU zaban ko follow karna usski izzat-o-abroo ko mehfooz rakhnay ko aap SENTI ka naam daitii hain tou mujhay aisa SENTI-MENTAL hona manzoor hay Aur agar aisa sochna ROSHAN KHAYAALI nahin hay tou main 'KHABTII' hi thiik hoon

[shazia rana]

Assalaam-O-alaikum @shazia rana;

Meray khayal hay kay baat ka agar ghalat rukh laina hay tou woh koi hum say seekhay, main nay hi khuwamakhuwa itnay fatway jhaaR diye...

Roshan khayali ki khoobsurat misaaal tou humari qoum day rahii hay kay itna khoobsurat BAHAR kay mousam ko Yaani MOUSAM-E-BAHAR kay sunna bhi khoobsurat lagta hay ko BASANT ka naam dia hua hay aur woh bhi aisa naam jiss ka URDU say koi ta'aluq nahin..... Jab kay HINDU mazhab kay bhawaan RAM ki LELA ki Khadaama ka naam BASANTI thii!!

Aap khusdh sochyeh kay kia BASANT ya Basanat say nikla BASANTII naam agar hum bahar kay saath munsoob karain tou
Gul-Bahar banay ga Gul-Basant ya Gul Basantii
Sada-Bahar banay ga Sada-Basantii
Dil-e-no Bahar banay ga Dil-e-no Basant
Fasl-e-Bahar banay gii fasl-e-basantii

Aisay tou aur bhi bohat say PUNJABI kay mousaam hain, jaisay Saawan bhadoon, Jait, MalhaR, HaaR, Baysaaki waghaira... tou unn sab per bhi TEHWAAR hona banta hay, hum roushan-khayal unn per tou koi tehwaar nahin maanatay tou yeh BASANT per itni meharbaani kiyon
Allama Iqbal, Faiz Ahmed Faiz, Meera Jee, Ustaab Daaman, Habib Jalib, jaisay azeem shora-e-karaam nay apni poori zindagi Punjab main guzaari, unhoon nay tou Urdu aur Punjabi main BAHAR ko BAHAAR ki kaha, main nay tou kahin BASANT nahin paRha, albatta agar aap nay paRha ho tou zaroor meri 'qaleel aur mehdood maloomaat' main izaafa karain.

Haan agar URDU zaban ko follow karna usski izzat-o-abroo ko mehfooz rakhnay ko aap SENTI ka naam daitii hain tou mujhay aisa SENTI-MENTAL hona manzoor hay Aur agar aisa sochna ROSHAN KHAYAALI nahin hay tou main 'KHABTII' hi thiik hoon

wah paen tusi te basant da operation kerta ikk hath maf kerdo men janti hun apni qaleel malumaat ki wajah se bahar ko basant keh dia halankeh dono angrezi maheene march ya april men e ate hen per koi nai men bohat alaa zarf hun dusri mene beyond the limits rehne ki bat ki jis se koi b agree ker sakta hai or teesri or akhri bat......................................................... ...................

[shazia rana]

Aap ko meethi lassi pasand hay,,, aur kisi ki meethi baatain.... bas yeh MITHAAS hii tou hay jo logon ko waha jaanay per majboor kartii hay!!! khayal rakhain PAEN ziyada meetha Sehat kay liye nuqsaanday hota hay

100 man ki dhoban hone k bad kb peeti hun

[thefire1]

aap ki har baat per ka aik hi jawab hay meray paas aur INSHALLAH humesha rahay ga aur woh hay


































































You are always RESPECTED and your writing is an HONOUR for all of us Khush rahyeh

wah paen tusi te basant da operation kerta ikk hath maf kerdo men janti hun apni qaleel malumaat ki wajah se bahar ko basant keh dia halankeh dono angrezi maheene march ya april men e ate hen per koi nai men bohat alaa zarf hun dusri mene beyond the limits rehne ki bat ki jis se koi b agree ker sakta hai or teesri or akhri bat......................................................... ...................

[sannan]

مجھے تو کردنیں کٹتی نظر آتی ہیں Û” خدا غارت کرے جو ایسی ایسی ÙˆØ+Ø´ÛŒ ڈوریں Ù„Û’ کر پتنگ بازی Ú©Û’ نام پر گردنیں کاٹتے نظر آتے ہیں Û” ہم دہشت گردوں Ú©ÛŒ تو مزمت کرتے ہیں اور بسنت بازی Ú©Û’ لیئے ریلیاں نکالتے نظر آتے ہیں Û”

I just hate this festival

[shazia rana]

aap ki har baat per ka aik hi jawab hay meray paas aur INSHALLAH humesha rahay ga aur woh hay


































































You are always RESPECTED and your writing is an HONOUR for all of us Khush rahyeh

thanx per aise mubahise ka end is pe nai hua k mene ap se agree kiya ya ap ne mujh se wajah kisi na kisi or MOD se bas kerne ki b wajah ho sakti hai,chalo pm ch larr lene an m kidding paen asal men main khud bohat dukhi hun k apni bat sahi se nai pohancha pai shayad..ap ne jo kaha wo b ghalat nai,if i was harsh or bitter on any point i must say sorry..may Allah bless u

[shazia rana]

مجھے تو کردنیں کٹتی نظر آتی ہیں Û” خدا غارت کرے جو ایسی ایسی ÙˆØ+Ø´ÛŒ ڈوریں Ù„Û’ کر پتنگ بازی Ú©Û’ نام پر گردنیں کاٹتے نظر آتے ہیں Û” ہم دہشت گردوں Ú©ÛŒ تو مزمت کرتے ہیں اور بسنت بازی Ú©Û’ لیئے ریلیاں نکالتے نظر آتے ہیں Û”

I just hate this festival

men ise tumari raye samjhun ya participation Sannaan singharre

[thefire1]

Meri tarbiyat yeh hay kay PAEN agar ghussa bhi kar lain tou khamooshi say he unki baat suno Jo main nay ki. ........magar





























aap nay SORRY kar kay aik lamhay main paraaya kar dia

thanx per aise mubahise ka end is pe nai hua k mene ap se agree kiya ya ap ne mujh se wajah kisi na kisi or MOD se bas kerne ki b wajah ho sakti hai,chalo pm ch larr lene an m kidding paen asal men main khud bohat dukhi hun k apni bat sahi se nai pohancha pai shayad..ap ne jo kaha wo b ghalat nai,if i was harsh or bitter on any point i must say sorry..may Allah bless u