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  1. 22-12-2015, 06:36 PM #1
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    assalamoalikum freinds mujhe shoq hai shair or shairi ka per mujhe sahi likhni nahi atti.mera maqsad yeh site join kaene ka yehin hain koi mujhe sekhade sahi kaise likhi jatti hai,yahni k koi meri islah karde thankyou
    meri yeh shayari pariyae ga or iss ki islah karde naa please
    Aiy jane jana naa karna baat abb wafooan ki
    Kyoun k yeh dil abb Mukar Gaya hai
    yeh dil abb mohabat kerne se dargya hai
    Aiy jane jana nan karna baat sahoron ki
    Kyoun k yeh dil abb dilason se bhargya hai
    Aiy jane jana jab tum bhulate thae
    Toh zinda tha yeh dil
    Abb yaad tak b nahi karte
    To yeh dil margaya hai


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  2. 22-12-2015, 07:47 PM #2
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    Walaikum assalaam

    Achi kaawish hay.... Likhti rahyeh.

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    Humian tu khud islah ki zaroort jai
    Khiar good likhti rahin wase 2 lines shair likhy kafiye milane ki koshish karein
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    Quote Originally Posted by feroza View Post
    assalamoalikum freinds mujhe shoq hai shair or shairi ka per mujhe sahi likhni nahi atti.mera maqsad yeh site join kaene ka yehin hain koi mujhe sekhade sahi kaise likhi jatti hai,yahni k koi meri islah karde thankyou
    meri yeh shayari pariyae ga or iss ki islah karde naa please
    Aiy jane jana naa karna baat abb wafooan ki
    Kyoun k yeh dil abb Mukar Gaya hai
    yeh dil abb mohabat kerne se dargya hai
    Aiy jane jana nan karna baat sahoron ki
    Kyoun k yeh dil abb dilason se bhargya hai
    Aiy jane jana jab tum bhulate thae
    Toh zinda tha yeh dil
    Abb yaad tak b nahi karte
    To yeh dil margaya hai


    wah buhat acha likha hai u ne keep writing
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