shair aur shairi

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Assalamoalikum kaise hu sab, yeh meri shairi koi theek kardena mera matlb koi iss ki tasheen kardena.App jante hu na mujhe shoq hai per likhni nhi atti phir bhi likhti rehthi hu nawazish

Aiy dost samjh lo tum matlb humari dosti ka
Tum hoe woh joe dour ho kaar be pass rehte hoh
Doosroe se bohut khass hoe
Ehsaas hai app k hone kaa
Jinae Talash karthi hai takdeer tum woh hoh


Hazaar khushiyan milthi hai app se dost
Meri zindagi mei tum phool ban kar ai hu dost
Jahn per mujhe milaye kaante dost
Tum ne hi woh dour kardiyae dost

[Usm@n Butt]

khosish achi hai bar bar likhnya sya ghalti door ho jiya gi good work

[sheem]

hmmm very nice try

[feroza]

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[Vampire]

nice likha hai ji

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