Sometimes I think
You are with me
We are playing
Hide and seek again
you unpinned my hairs
While I bent on books
I recall all mischieves
We made on Dining Table
You scold me on mistake
But not loud to care
You taught me while pressing
How slots of clothes remove
And in the kitchen I nill
You guided how to cook
I committed all the mistakes
You made me all to improve
In Every Ramadan
You recall us Tajweed
When I was little
You used to care
I never took the jeans
You Forbid me to wear
On every day of Eid
You used to come at first
Wearing in the white
I always loved to see
And liked to tease you hugging,
Demanding my Eidi...
But Now on This Eid
When I wouldn't see
A Brother likely father
A Brother likely friend
A Brother that's my teacher
A Brother that's my all
How I will stop my eyes
To pour and be wet??
How I'll keep the promise,
That we 'll never miss???
May your soul rest in Peace... Ameen
Last edited by Arosa Hya; 20-06-2016 at 11:15 PM.
,,,وہی تو سب سے زیادہ ہے نُکتہ چِیں میرا
..!!!جو مُسکرا کے ہمیشہ گلے لگائے مجھے
This will never ever be filled na .. Allah ap ko sabar de aur Ap ke bhai ko jannat mai Jagah de..
beautifully written mujhe mere bhai k sath guzra time b yaad agaya
thank you
I initially thought that I don’t have words to express my feelings after reading your post therefore I will not be commenting on this…. But slowly I gathered few words and I am certain these words wont do much!
@Arosa Hya;, very well written dear, Infact I would say that you have expressed your true feelings and those feelings turn into words and been presented in form of this poem.
Each line has a history describing the great moments you spent with your late brother,
Each word has a feeling of the warmth you must have felt with the company of your brother,
Each stanza has LOVE that was so affectionately felt and I am sure nothing in this world can replace such LOVE…
Our heart goes out for you and we are equally feeling your pain and sorrow… We pray to Almighty ALLAH to give you and your family strength to bear this irreparable loss.
May your brother soul rest in peace Ameen sum ameen
Last edited by thefire1; 25-06-2016 at 03:06 PM.
Ameen Rabbana yarham alaina wastaghfir ameen
,,,وہی تو سب سے زیادہ ہے نُکتہ چِیں میرا
..!!!جو مُسکرا کے ہمیشہ گلے لگائے مجھے
Nice
پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا