Shair Jo Dil Mein Utar Gaya Ho....!

[maya]

yoonhi wo de raha he qatall ki dhamkiyan
hum kon sa zinda hain jo marr jaingey

[maya]

jo chaahoN bhi tou ab khud ko badal sakta nahi hoN
samander hoN, kinaaroN se nikal sakta nahi hoN

[maya]

lafz kafi nahin hain safar ke liay, is dayar-e-sukhn main guzar ke liay..
aajazi chahi'ai, agahi chahi'ai, dard-e-dil chahi'ai, chashm-e-tar chahi'ai

[UuLO0oº]

aapke paas to pura khazana bhara parha lagta hai.. Aik se barhker aik hai

Thanks for sharing.

[maya]

hahaha aisa hi samjhiye thanx psandidgi k liye aapki sharing ka intzar hai

aapke paas to pura khazana bhara parha lagta hai.. Aik se barhker aik hai

Thanks for sharing.

[maya]

hamen pukaar lo jab chaaho ham milenge vahiin
mile hain Khaak mein lekin vaqaar baaqii hai

[UuLO0oº]

hahaha aisa hi samjhiye thanx psandidgi k liye aapki sharing ka intzar hai

ab ham kahan se itney urdudaan hain? kabhi sochta hon ke koi 400-500 shair ka ratta laga lon per yeh ho nahin sakta, baat kabhi banti hi nahin hai

vaqaar ki meaning bhi bata dein in your last couplet?

[maya]

baton se to lagty ho.


koshish kijye koi cheez namumkin nahi....


waqaar...Shaan ..Azmat ..respected .

ab ham kahan se itney urdudaan hain? kabhi sochta hon ke koi 400-500 shair ka ratta laga lon per yeh ho nahin sakta, baat kabhi banti hi nahin hai

vaqaar ki meaning bhi bata dein in your last couplet?

[~Qųeeň♡]

she'r dar asl wo hee hain ''hasrat''
sunte hee dil mein jo utar jayein
[ hasrat mohani]

Asslam o Alikum...


aaiye dosto ek nayaa silsilaa shuroo karte hain iss forum par.
kabhee-kabhee hamein koee shair dil ko bahut chhoo jaata hai usse parhte waqt aour ham usse kisee ke saath 'share' karnaa chaahte hain....to dosto jab bhee koee shair aapko behad pasand aajaaye to usse aap yahaa'n 'post' kar ne kee zahmat karein jis se kee aap ke aour dost-o-ahbaab uss se lutf-andoz ho sakein...ummeed hai aap meri baat samajh gaye honge.

leejiye abhee-abhee maine ek sher parhaa aour mujhe bahut pasnd aaya, aap sab ko nazar kar rahii hoo'n..
kOii tO Raabta hAi jO dhOondta hOn Usey
Choua Na hOga tO MehSOos Kar ChUka hOnga
Misaal e Raig hOn Main Sa'aatOn Kii mUthii Mein
wO jAb Tak Aaye Ga Main Sara Bikhar ChUka hOnga

Wahhh umdahh topic

Haan waqayi siso aesa hota hai ... chalien me b zarur share krungi

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[~Qųeeň♡]

yoonhi wo de raha he qatall ki dhamkiyan
hum kon sa zinda hain jo marr jaingey

Umdahh

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