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  1. 18-04-2008, 12:07 AM #11
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    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Janaum din per likhi hui ya nazum .... achai lagi umda

    Happy Birthday again

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  2. 18-04-2008, 07:57 PM #12
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    zaberdast hai janab
    Bohat Shukria ji..

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    Quote Originally Posted by asif shahzad View Post
    wha kia batt hi buhat umdha sharing
    pazeerai ka Behad Shukria..

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    wah jab kia baat hai

    bht khoob
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  5. 19-04-2008, 08:02 PM #15
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    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    apni salgirah per likhi eik nazm..jaldi mein taseeh ke beghair hi share ker raha hon.. so yaar logon se maazrat ke saath.. Happy birthday to me!!

    taqreebejanamdintu2 - **Taqreeb-e-Janam Din**
    boht hi achi kawish hay,,kamaal e fan nazar aaya hay is nazm main..laikin aik boht bari ghalati hogai hay..jis ki waja say taqreeban nazm rad hogae hay.or ghalati hay imla ki... janam hindi zuban ka lafz hay... or hindi zuban ko tarkeeb main istamaal krnay ki urdu main qat,an ijaazat nahi hay..taqreeb e janam din or janam kay saath tum nay jitni bhi tarakeeb banae hain wo ghalat hain inhi baton kay liye ham nay wc main urdu imla kay hawalay say aik seekhnay or sikhanay ka silsila shuro kiya hay,agar tum sa qaabil sha,ir waha aaiy to yaqeenan hamari hosla afzaae hogi
    aik misra likha hay tum nay:
    abhi deeda e tasawwur gham e yaar say laray hain
    agar misra aisay hi hay to imla kay hisab say misra yoon banay ga
    abhi deeda e tasawwur gham e yaar say lara hay
    laikin is tarha bhi mafhoom nahi ban raha,is ki tarkeeb yoon honi chahiye
    abhi deeda ``o`` tasawwur gham e yaar say laray hain:
    agar tum samjho kay main nay koi ghalat nishan dahi ki hay to mujhay zuroor aagah krna...
    is kay ilawa nazm apnay khaaliq ki bay panah khallaqi ki gawah hay
    boht shukriya
    Ali zubair
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  6. 20-04-2008, 06:43 PM #16
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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    baat haian jaanab ki phir
    bus yehe kasar thi baki
    is qadar khoobsoorat tareef ka Behad Shukria..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Janaum din per likhi hui ya nazum .... achai lagi umda

    Happy Birthday again

    FeamnAllah
    walaikum-salam

    sarahany ka Behad Shukria..

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*~Mehar~*~ View Post
    wah jab kia baat hai

    bht khoob
    aap ne waqt nikala aur saraha.. Bohat Shukria..

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  9. 20-04-2008, 06:53 PM #19
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    Quote Originally Posted by Đŕeåmẹr View Post
    boht hi achi kawish hay,,kamaal e fan nazar aaya hay is nazm main..laikin aik boht bari ghalati hogai hay..jis ki waja say taqreeban nazm rad hogae hay.or ghalati hay imla ki... janam hindi zuban ka lafz hay... or hindi zuban ko tarkeeb main istamaal krnay ki urdu main qat,an ijaazat nahi hay..taqreeb e janam din or janam kay saath tum nay jitni bhi tarakeeb banae hain wo ghalat hain inhi baton kay liye ham nay wc main urdu imla kay hawalay say aik seekhnay or sikhanay ka silsila shuro kiya hay,agar tum sa qaabil sha,ir waha aaiy to yaqeenan hamari hosla afzaae hogi
    aik misra likha hay tum nay:
    abhi deeda e tasawwur gham e yaar say laray hain
    agar misra aisay hi hay to imla kay hisab say misra yoon banay ga
    abhi deeda e tasawwur gham e yaar say lara hay
    laikin is tarha bhi mafhoom nahi ban raha,is ki tarkeeb yoon honi chahiye
    abhi deeda ``o`` tasawwur gham e yaar say laray hain:
    agar tum samjho kay main nay koi ghalat nishan dahi ki hay to mujhay zuroor aagah krna...
    is kay ilawa nazm apnay khaaliq ki bay panah khallaqi ki gawah hay
    boht shukriya
    Ali zubair
    Janab-e-Ali Zubair!

    aap ne nazm ko parha aur parkha.. khushi huee.. nazm radd kernay ka Shukria..mera bhi apni tamam shayeri ke baray mein yehi khayal hai.. magar main ne isi liye pehlay maazrat ki thi ke beghair taseeh ke pesh ker raha hon.. ye nazm purani likhi huee hai .. ab ki baar socha tha ke taseeh ker ke pesh keron ga.. magar waqt na mil saka to yunhi hazir ker di.. aap ne jin ghaltiyon ki nishandahi ki .. wo bhi durust.. magar iss nazm mein aur bhi kuch ghaltiyaa'n hein.. jo maloom hein.. aap ki hindi tarkeeb wali baat wazahat talb hai .. eik to janm hindi ka nahi sanskrit ka lafz hai .. ye theek ke hindi mein bhi mustamil hai .. doosra ho sakta hai aap ke kehnay ka matlab ho ke hindi aur sanskrit dono ko tarkeeb mein istemal nahi kiya ja sakta.. magar pyar sanskrit ka lafz hai ... aur pyar-o-ikhlaas urdu mein mustamil hai.. kuch lughaat mein bhi dekh chuka hon.. kuch mein pyar ikhlaas eik saath likha hai aur kuch mein pyar-o-ikhlaas hi darj hai .. isi tarah pyar-o-mohabbat bhi mustamil hai ..iss matan mein aap kya kehtay hein???

    aur aap ne wc mein jo silsila shuru kiya wo besh'baha hai.. dekh chuka hon.. baqi hum iss qabil nahi ke aap ke shagird ka darja pa saken.. Nawazish..

    sab keren tareef meri ye zaroori to nahi
    aap ne tanqeed ki hai aap ka bhi shukria

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    wah ji wah,
    yahaan to baRi khoobsurat adbi baat cheet ho rahi hai,jis se yaqeenan mujh jeson ko bahot kuchh seekhaney ko mil sakta hai,
    issey aor is tarah ke behis mubaaisey jaari rakhiye plz.bahot kuchh seekhaney ko milta hai in se
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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