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  1. 15-04-2008, 10:09 PM #1
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    Default gheir ho betha hai jo,ab woh mera kesey ho?

    ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
    aek aor ghazal,bardaasht kijiye ga,
    aor apni bahot qeemati aara dena naheen bhooliye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,




    gheirhobeithahaijo - gheir ho betha hai jo,ab woh mera kesey ho?
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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  2. 16-04-2008, 12:12 AM #2
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    Bewaja Ashk Chalak Aaye Meri Aankhon Se


    Jub Sar_E_Raah Kabhi Us Ne Kaha Kaise Ho






    Mere Paas ALfaaz Nahin Hain Ke Itni Khubsoorat Ghazal Ke Baare Main Kiya Likhoon

    Bohot Khuboosrat Ghazal Hai Dost

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  3. 16-04-2008, 01:01 AM #3
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    bewaja ashak chhalak aye meri ankhon say
    jab sar-e- rah uss nay kaha kesay ko


    uss ki yadoon mein gira soch raha hoon kab say
    gul say khushbu ka badan Zain juda kesay ho


    be-hadh khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay
    ranisrequest - gheir ho betha hai jo,ab woh mera kesey ho?
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    Bahoot khoob janab
    nice poetry
    dilduniyameinsiggysd - gheir ho betha hai jo,ab woh mera kesey ho?
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  5. 16-04-2008, 04:00 AM #5
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    Walekam-Asalm!
    Mslay aur zindaan kay maa'ni bata dein.....Jazak ALLAH!
    Bohat he acha likha hai hamesha ki taran......ab tou wah wah bhi kam parnay laga hai!
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    inthayi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai ap nay...


    really v nice..
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  7. 16-04-2008, 06:17 AM #7
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    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Tears View Post
    Bewaja Ashk Chalak Aaye Meri Aankhon Se


    Jub Sar_E_Raah Kabhi Us Ne Kaha Kaise Ho






    Mere Paas ALfaaz Nahin Hain Ke Itni Khubsoorat Ghazal Ke Baare Main Kiya Likhoon

    Bohot Khuboosrat Ghazal Hai Dost

    Lekin Ek Baat


    Keep More Sharing Plz
    be had mamnoon hoon janaab,is pazeeraayi ke liye,
    INSHA ALLAH aap jesey ba zoq logon ka saath raha to share karney ki koshish karta rahoon ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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  8. 16-04-2008, 06:18 AM #8
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    bewaja ashak chhalak aye meri ankhon say
    jab sar-e- rah uss nay kaha kesay ko


    uss ki yadoon mein gira soch raha hoon kab say
    gul say khushbu ka badan Zain juda kesay ho


    be-hadh khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aap nay

    bahot shukriya Rani,ghazal ki pasandeedagi ke liye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wasi Anjum View Post
    Bahoot khoob janab
    nice poetry

    bahot shukriya Anjum,is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Walekam-Asalm!
    Mslay aur zindaan kay maa'ni bata dein.....Jazak ALLAH!
    Bohat he acha likha hai hamesha ki taran......ab tou wah wah bhi kam parnay laga hai!
    bahot shukriya Hijaab,is pzeeraayi ke liye,

    Misl...misaal ka mukhafaf hai,jis ke ma.ani hain,milta julta,wesa hi,waghera waghera,
    zindaaN,.....qaid khaaney ko kehtey hain.

    aek baar phir bahot shukriya,ghazal pasand karney ke liye,
    aor agar wah wah kam paRney lagi hai,to kam wah wah kar liya karo na,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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