weeran kr gaya

[dreamer]

Dil Jeet Liya Itni Khubsoorat Ghazal Share Kar Ke

janab ki inayet hay..dil to aap logon nay itni mohabbat say hamara bhi jeet liya hay shukriya khamosh aanso ji

[withlove]

wahhh bohat khoob.. khalid sahib ki zameen ko bohat acha sencha.. ghazal pasand ayee.. sabhi ashaar hum'palla hein.. intekhaab mushkil hai..so dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Bohat Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

[Rani]

ahan raani ji kesay mizaaj hain janab kay? boht boht shukriya aap ka ye misra e tarahi hay janab

mizaaj bekhair o affiyat say hein

umeed hai k aap b khair khairiyat say hoon gay

aap nay be'had achi poem likhi hai

wesay yeh "misra-e-tarahi" ka matlab samjh daien gay plz?

[Hijaab]

Assalamo-Alekam
bohat he khoob.....aik aik lafz bohat he gehra aur jazbaat say muziyan hai......
bohat si daad!

[dreamer]

wahhh bohat khoob.. khalid sahib ki zameen ko bohat acha sencha.. ghazal pasand ayee.. sabhi ashaar hum'palla hein.. intekhaab mushkil hai..so dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Bohat Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

huzoor nawazis hay ,karam hay,mahrbani hay,shukriya hay,,is dil kheer pasandeedgi ka jawab nahi apnay paas..boht shukriya janab ka

[dreamer]

mizaaj bekhair o affiyat say hein

umeed hai k aap b khair khairiyat say hoon gay

aap nay be'had achi poem likhi hai

wesay yeh "misra-e-tarahi" ka matlab samjh daien gay plz?

ahan!! rani huzoorji janab main bhi bilkul khairyet say hon tarahi misray ka matlab hota hay aisay misra jo sho,ara ko day un say kaha jata hay kay is misray ki bahr o qafiye main ghazal kahain..to ye misra khalid shareef saahb ka hay.us pr main nay ye ghazal likhi thiboht boht khush raho,sada hansti muskrati raho

[dreamer]

Assalamo-Alekam
bohat he khoob.....aik aik lafz bohat he gehra aur jazbaat say muziyan hai......
bohat si daad!

hijaab aap ka boht boht shukriya... ji ye jazbaat hi hain jo shair main dhaltay jatay hain...jab koi acha sha,ir pasand krta hay to acha lagat hay

[Rani]

ahan!! rani huzoorji janab main bhi bilkul khairyet say hon tarahi misray ka matlab hota hay aisay misra jo sho,ara ko day un say kaha jata hay kay is misray ki bahr o qafiye main ghazal kahain..to ye misra khalid shareef saahb ka hay.us pr main nay ye ghazal likhi thiboht boht khush raho,sada hansti muskrati raho

bohat bohat shukriya samjhany k aur duaoon ka b
chain aye meray dil ko dua kijiye

[dreamer]

bohat bohat shukriya samjhany k aur duaoon ka b
chain aye meray dil ko dua kijiye

apna falsafa kuch mukhtalif hay ji!dil ka chain to ham baddua samjhtay hain...pahlo main jab tak ye baywafa dil baychain o muztarib hay,tab tak jeenay ka bahana muyassir hay,kuch likhnay ko saman isi dil ki baychaini say muyassir aata hay..dharakta,machalta hy ye dil to isi baychaini say!janab agr dil ko sukonn agaya to share kesay honagy,nazm kesay kahi jaaiy gi...lafz bhi dil hi kay saath pusakoon hojain gay... albaata ye dua krta hon kay dil kisi na rasa ki talab say baaz aajaiy

[~*~Mehar~*~]

wah

hmsha ki terha bht hi zbrdst