Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Zain ! Fard kuch kuch aur samjh mai aya hay , yani mai jo ya samjha hok Fard Ghazal mai nahi ho sakta , Fard aik Tanha sahir ko kha jata hay , jis mai Qafiya aur Radeef ki qaid nahi hay . sahi ?

yani akyla tanha shair fard khilata hay jis mai aik baat jo aap khna chaty hy mukmal ho jay ?

FeamNAllah

[dreamer]

hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya,
arrey kiyoon gunehgaar kartey ho yaar,aap mujh se ziyaada jaantey ho shaairy ke baarey main,ham ne to abhi seekhana shuru kiya hai,

chalo ji,tumara daakhala ho gaya hai,apni 2 saal ki fee (paishagi) jama kara do Naz ke paas.,

shukriya huzoor nawzish janab e man ki....yaar ye to sara sar zarra nawazi hay...mujhay kuch bhi nahi aata siwaaiy tamak toiyyan marnay kay, apnay andar ka haal to main hi janta hon!! Dakhla ki badhaae naz kay pas q....ham to ustaad kay pas jam krwaain gay... lo ji ye rahi hamari dakhla badhaae:













janab gin lo! pooray 999 hain ji. agar aik bhi kam ziyada ho kahiyye ga.ab to dakhla inayet ho!

[ishtiaq zain]

Assalamo-Alekam!
Theek hai Mr. Zain, agar aap ko Ustad kehlwana acha nahi lagta tou hum nahi kahein gey.......lekin hum sirf aap ko naam say nahi pukarein gey!
Aur INSHALLAH hum aap kay asbaaq ko baqaida print ker kay booklet bana lein gey aur jaisay imtihan ki tayari kartay hein waisay parein gey....kyon kay Shayri bhi hamari aik manzil hai aur rasta tou hamein sehal karnay ho ga na
Aap ko yaqeen dilatay hein kay apni pori akal bhira kay hum mashq kiya karein gey INSHALLAH!

WALEKUM ASLAAM,

arrey achha kis ko naheen lagta Ustaad kehlaana,lekin banda is qaabil bhi to hona chaahiye na,ustaadi ke martabey tak pohanchatey pohanchatey to aek umr beet jaati hai,aor main to abhi alif se bey tak naheen pohancha,
bahot achhi baat hai,bahot khushi huyi jaan kar ke aap seekhaney main waaqati mukhlis hain,issi khushi main yeh gulaab aap ka huwa,
meri tamaam mehnat ka sila agar kuchh hai to bas itna ke aap shaairy ke baarey main jaan jaayain,aor ramooz (jin ke asbaaq aagey aaney waaley hain) samajh jaayain,

[ishtiaq zain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Zain ! Fard kuch kuch aur samjh mai aya hay , yani mai jo ya samjha hok Fard Ghazal mai nahi ho sakta , Fard aik Tanha sahir ko kha jata hay , jis mai Qafiya aur Radeef ki qaid nahi hay . sahi ?

yani akyla tanha shair fard khilata hay jis mai aik baat jo aap khna chaty hy mukmal ho jay ?

FeamNAllah

WALEKUM ASLAAM,
zabardast,aap bilkul theek samjey ho,shabaash.
yoon to aam feham zubaaN main ham issey sheir bhi keh saktey hain,aor ziyada tar log yahi kehtey bhi hain,lekin aap sab ko fard ke chakar main daalaney ka maqsad hi yahi tha ke jab bhi aap aehl-e-ilm ke saamaney beith ke baat karain to is ko is ke istalaahi naam se pukaarain,na ke is ki zaahiry shakal ke naam se,
khushi huyi ke aap fard ki bunyaad ko samajh gaye,v good.

[ishtiaq zain]

shukriya huzoor nawzish janab e man ki....yaar ye to sara sar zarra nawazi hay...mujhay kuch bhi nahi aata siwaaiy tamak toiyyan marnay kay, apnay andar ka haal to main hi janta hon!! Dakhla ki badhaae naz kay pas q....ham to ustaad kay pas jam krwaain gay... lo ji ye rahi hamari dakhla badhaae:

janab gin lo! pooray 999 hain ji. agar aik bhi kam ziyada ho kahiyye ga.ab to dakhla inayet ho!

maar di na DanDi,mujhey pehley hi shaq tha,hazoor yeh 999 naheen,915 hain,
kheir,tumaarey shoq aor itney saarey gulaab ikhatey karney ki mehnat ko dekhtey huye,ham tumain daakhala de hi detey hain,lekin agar sabq main DanDi maari to...............
bahot shukriya itney saarey phooloN ka,ab to saari umr ke liye kaafi hain,balke tamaam SD members ko baantata phiroon ga,

[Bheegi-Palkain]

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Zain dubara takleef dey rha hoon , Fard clear ho gya shukriya is mai aap ka bhi

Maqta ! mai nay maqata parha yani Ghazal mai koi shak nahi maqat bhot imp hay per 2 maqaty hum kuo likhty hay ? pahlay to zara is ko clear karya ga dosra ya qafiya jo hota hay us ki thori wazhat chiya , yani aik awaz ko hum qafiya khay gy ya us lafz ko jo dosry lafz mai ay ga

like
apnay hi ghazal ka mqata paish karta hoon

Apna sab kuch lutai betha hoon
yani khud ko mitai betha hoon

is mai agr hum urdu mai dekhy to Lutai aur Mitai k last mai ALIF + YEH aya hay yani bari yeh ...mazrat zara urdu weak hay meri is liya takleef dey rha hoon ab agr mai is trha kha doon

Apna sab kuch lutai betha hoon
yohi teri haay liyay betha hoon

i know ya wala shair sahi nahi hay per mai drasal qafiya clear karna cha rha hoon dono k last mein YEH aagya hay , is liya aap ko takleef di taky auro ko bhi misal mil jay aur mujhy bhi aik perfect clearance ho jay

FeamnAllah

[ishtiaq zain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Zain dubara takleef dey rha hoon , Fard clear ho gya shukriya is mai aap ka bhi

Maqta ! mai nay maqata parha yani Ghazal mai koi shak nahi maqat bhot imp hay per 2 maqaty hum kuo likhty hay ? pahlay to zara is ko clear karya ga dosra ya qafiya jo hota hay us ki thori wazhat chiya , yani aik awaz ko hum qafiya khay gy ya us lafz ko jo dosry lafz mai ay ga

like
apnay hi ghazal ka mqata paish karta hoon

Apna sab kuch lutai betha hoon
yani khud ko mitai betha hoon

is mai agr hum urdu mai dekhy to Lutai aur Mitai k last mai ALIF + YEH aya hay yani bari yeh ...mazrat zara urdu weak hay meri is liya takleef dey rha hoon ab agr mai is trha kha doon

Apna sab kuch lutai betha hoon
yohi teri haay liyay betha hoon

i know ya wala shair sahi nahi hay per mai drasal qafiya clear karna cha rha hoon dono k last mein YEH aagya hay , is liya aap ko takleef di taky auro ko bhi misal mil jay aur mujhy bhi aik perfect clearance ho jay

FeamnAllah

WALEKUM ASLAAM,
arrey naheen is main takleef kesi janaab,yeh silsila to shuru hi issi liye kiya gaya hai ke jo kuchh main jaanta hoon,ussey baaqi saathiyon tak pohanchaoon,so aap aek kaya,aek hazaar baar sawaal poochh saktey hain,main jis had tak jaanta huwa,INSHA ALLAH zaroor bataoon ga,


aap ne 2 sawaal kiye,pehla maqta ke baarey main,....
ma.azarat chaahat hoon ke main aap ka sawaal sahee tarah se naheen samj saka,ke aap 2 maqta kis ko keh rahey hain,kiyoon ke ghazal main to aek hi maqta hota hai,agar is sawaal ki thori mazeed wazaahat karain to shaaid jawaab dena merey liye aasaan ho jaaye,


aap ke pehley sheir main "lutaaye" aor " mitaaye" ham qaafiya alfaaz hain.
jabke doosarey sheir ke alfaaz ham qaafiya naheen hain,
qaafiya ka ham aawaaz hona(yehni un ki aawaaz ka aek jesa hona) zaroori hai,
lutaaye ke ham qaafiya alfaaz,bichhaaye,jalaaye,chalaaye,milaaye,waghera hain,lekin liye har giz naheen,
liye ke ham qaafiya honge,piye,jiye,kiye,waghera,
umeed hai aap ki uljhan door ho gayi ho gi,

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Sorry sorry .... pata nahi kya likh diya ... mai Mtala k bary mai kha tha sorry

FeamnAllah

[naz]

agar yeh aesa hi hai,jesa aap ne bataya,yehni yeh waahid sheir hai jo aap ne kaha,to phir yeh yaqeenan fard hi hai.
jab bhi,is sheir ko is ke istalaahi naam se pukaarain ge to is ko fard hi kahain ge.

yeh hue na baat ise tention main tu thi main ke yeh phir fard hai
jee yeh aik akela he hai .or Fard he hai..thanku uncle

[~*~Mehar~*~]

zain ji really nice vrk

and vry vry usefull

thnkx aloooot

bt mujy stilll bht hi hrd lagra hai iss sab ko yaad rakhna