Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1.

[Rani]

master ji

mein nay aik rubai likhi hai, mager mujhay wo kuch gadd madd si lagti hai

matlab usski tarteeb mujhay sahi nahi lag rahi

ager mein yaahan share karon plz usski tas'he karnay mein madad daien gay?

[ishtiaq zain]

master ji

mein nay aik rubai likhi hai, mager mujhay wo kuch gadd madd si lagti hai

matlab usski tarteeb mujhay sahi nahi lag rahi

ager mein yaahan share karon plz usski tas'he karnay mein madad daien gay?

Master ji to aaj chhuti par hain,albata aap chaaho to main kuchh madad karney ki koshish kar sakta hoon,
is main bhala poochhaney ki kaya baat hai,
aap bas post karo,phir sab mil ke us ki cheeR phaaR shuru kartey haiN,

[ishtiaq zain]

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
kesey haiN sab? umeed hai bakheir honge,

baRey afsos ki baat hai,main ne kab se,aap sab se aek sawaal poochha tha,lekin kissi ne bhi abhi tak us par kuchh naheen kaha,

phir se apni baat dohraata hooN,...........

jesa ke aksar saathi yeh keh rahey haiN,ya un ki post se aesa lag raha hai,ke yeh sab yaad rakhna un ke liye mushkil ka baahis ban raha hai,to issi mushkil ke hal ke tor par merey zehan main yeh khayaal aaya hai ke kiyoon na koyi aesa tareeqa ikhtiyaar kiya jaaye,jis se yeh sab yaad karna,aor yaad rakhna aasaan ho jaaye,

tareeqa yeh hai ke main aap se har roz kuchh sawaal kiya karoon ga,(jin ke jawabaat merey is mazmoon main mojood hain,) aap ko karna bas yeh hai ke mazmoon ko paR ke,un main se un sawaaloN ke jawaab dhondana hain,aor phir yahaan likh dena hai,( yaqeen kijiye jo baat is waqt aap ko bahot mushkil lag rahi hai,be had aasaan ho jaaye gi,),

so aap sab ki is baarey main kaya raaye hain,jaldi se yahaan aa kar bataaiye,ta ke is silsiley ko aagey baRaya ja sakey,

[~*~Mehar~*~]

silsila pasand karney,aor hosala afzaayi ke liye shukriya
hard lag raha hai? to mujhey bataayain na,main yahaan issi liye hoon ke jo baat mushkil lagey,samajh na aaye,us ka hal bataoon,aor jahaan tak mumkin ho,us ko aasaan tareeqey se samjhaoon,

aap ki is mushkil ka ,ke yeh sab yaad naheen ho raha,aasaan sa hal hai merey paas aor woh yeh ke.......
aap is ko yaad hi na karain, ho gaya na masla hal?

aap is ko yaad na karo,balke is ko aahista aahista paRo,aor samajhney ki koshish karo ke ghazal aor qitta main kaya farq hai,qitta aor rubaayi main kaya farq hai,etc etc
aor agar kuchh mushkil paish aaye,ya samajh main na aaye to mujh se poochh lo,
basss itna sa hi kaam hai.

Haan me nay ahista ahista read kia hai

kafi had tak smjh agaya hai

it not hard really app nay bht achy say explain kia hai

thnkx aloot

[~*~Mehar~*~]

wah jee kitne ache Teacher hian Mehar tum tu tora bhot likh bhi lete ho jo log bilkul anjaan hian shairi se inke liye tu mushkil hoga tumhare liye nahi..koshish karo ssamjhne ki sub samaj ajaye ga...aik aik karke dekho sub zarori nahi sub aik sath karo..phele dekh lo rubaye kiya iske bad baki chezain...hamain koi jalid nahi hia,

haan appo ina hard tu nahi hai ...ab thora thora ker k para hai tu smjh agaya hai

[Rani]

idea acha hai master ji

[ishtiaq zain]

Haan me nay ahista ahista read kia hai

kafi had tak smjh agaya hai

it not hard really app nay bht achy say explain kia hai

thnkx aloot

good,phir to achhi baat hai,
meri koshish ko saraahaney ka be had shukriya,
bahot khush rahiye,aor aati jaati raha karain is thread main,ta ke mujhey bhi aehsaas hota rahey ke meri mehnat raaigaaN naheen gayi,

[ishtiaq zain]

idea acha hai master ji

thanks 4 repling,
chand aek aor members ki aara aa jaaye to phir dekhtey haiN,jo bhi memebrs ka faisala ho ga,wesa kar lain ge INSHA ALLAH,

aor aap ki rubaayi kahaan hai janaab?

[Bheegi-Palkain]

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
kesey haiN sab? umeed hai bakheir honge,

baRey afsos ki baat hai,main ne kab se,aap sab se aek sawaal poochha tha,lekin kissi ne bhi abhi tak us par kuchh naheen kaha,

phir se apni baat dohraata hooN,...........

jesa ke aksar saathi yeh keh rahey haiN,ya un ki post se aesa lag raha hai,ke yeh sab yaad rakhna un ke liye mushkil ka baahis ban raha hai,to issi mushkil ke hal ke tor par merey zehan main yeh khayaal aaya hai ke kiyoon na koyi aesa tareeqa ikhtiyaar kiya jaaye,jis se yeh sab yaad karna,aor yaad rakhna aasaan ho jaaye,

tareeqa yeh hai ke main aap se har roz kuchh sawaal kiya karoon ga,(jin ke jawabaat merey is mazmoon main mojood hain,) aap ko karna bas yeh hai ke mazmoon ko paR ke,un main se un sawaaloN ke jawaab dhondana hain,aor phir yahaan likh dena hai,( yaqeen kijiye jo baat is waqt aap ko bahot mushkil lag rahi hai,be had aasaan ho jaaye gi,),

so aap sab ki is baarey main kaya raaye hain,jaldi se yahaan aa kar bataaiye,ta ke is silsiley ko aagey baRaya ja sakey,

Assalam-o_Alikum WR WB

Mazrat zain meri nazar nahi parhi thi aap k sawal mai

Mai to balky aaj ya kahany aya tha k next class kab shuru kar rhy hy per chaly koi baat nahi hy ... sab ko saath lay kar hi aagay barhna hay , aap sawal karya INSHALAH jawab dey gy acha hy revision ho jay ga

FeamnAllah

[ishtiaq zain]

Assalam-o_Alikum WR WB

Mazrat zain meri nazar nahi parhi thi aap k sawal mai

Mai to balky aaj ya kahany aya tha k next class kab shuru kar rhy hy per chaly koi baat nahi hy ... sab ko saath lay kar hi aagay barhna hay , aap sawal karya INSHALAH jawab dey gy acha hy revision ho jay ga

FeamnAllah

WALEKUM ASLAAM.
tawajah deney ka shukriya MASTER ji, koyi baat naheen,deir aaye,darust aaye,

main to chaah raha tha ke issi haftey agla tutorial post ho jaata,lekin agar saathiyoN ko samajh hi na aaye,aor ham aagey baR jaaye to phir is ka kuchh maqsad hi naheen rahey ga,issi liye socha ke sawaal jawaab ka silsila shuru kiya jaaye,aek to yeh pata chal jaaye ga ke kis ko kitna samajh aaya hai,doosara agar kissi ko kuchh mushkil paish aa rahi hai to us ki madad bhi ho jaaye,
jab yeh mazmoon sab ko (qaabil-e-qabool had tak) samajh aa gaya to phir INSHA ALLAH agla mazmoon post kar diya jaaye ga,
tab tak aap bhi aatey jaate rahiye,hissa letey rahiye,
bahot shukriya,bahot khush rahiye,