ghazal,jab se jaanam tum sitamgar ho gaye

[ishtiaq zain]

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
dosto main phir se haazir,apni aek nayi ghazal ke saath,nayi to kher naheen hain,kuchh arsa pehley kahi thi,balke yeh kehna ziyaada behtar hai ke meri pehli ghazal hai,jo baaqaaida waz,aor behar ka khayaal rakh ke kahi thi,
so ghazal paRiye,lekin apni bahot qeemati aara se nawaazana naheen bhooliye ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Wasi Anjum]

bahoot khoob janab nice poetry
bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhia hai aap ne

[Hijaab]

Walekam-Aslam
very well written!

[ur_friend]

bht achey gazal likhye hai

[naz]

bhot umda janab...ap ki tarif kaise ki jaye yeh samj he nahi ati

[Bheegi-Palkain]

bhot umda janab...ap ki tarif kaise ki jaye yeh samj he nahi ati

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Me ki trha kar lo


Bhottttttttttttttt Umda Zain


FeamnAllah

[dreamer]

yaar zain kamal ki ghazal kahi hay..or is main kuch tumhara andaz e bayan badla huwa dikha huwa...boht saadgi say tum nay share kahain hain...or ye kawish mujhay bay had pasand aai hay,,tarannum ,taghazzul,sahl e mumtana,,sabhi kuch hay ustaad ji sada khush raho..or parhwatay raho or daad samait tay raho

[ishtiaq zain]

bahoot khoob janab nice poetry
bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhia hai aap ne

bahot shukriya Wasi anjum saahib,is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[ishtiaq zain]

Walekam-Aslam
very well written!

bahot shukriya Hijab,
aap hamesha hi bahot pzeeraayi karti haiN,jis ke liye be had mamnoon hoon,
bahot khush rahiye,

[ishtiaq zain]

bht achey gazal likhye hai

bahot shukriya MY_FRIEND,
aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,