Assalamo-Alekam!
aap ki qeemti aa'ra ka intizar rahey ga!
bahot khoob Hijab saahiba,achhey khayaal baandhey hain aap ne ash.aar main,bahot achha laha par ke,
is ghazal main aap ne radeef aor qaafiya ka bahot sahi khayaal rakha hai,aor paabandi ki hai,bahot achha laga,is par alag se daad,
baaqi jo kami beishi hai,woh musalsal mashq se door ho jaaye gi INSHA ALLAH,aap bas likhti aor ham se share karti rahiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
BAhoot khoob Hijab nice poetry
zaberdast hijab..
SD ki Basanti
Chal DhanoOo
I Love the feelings When U Hold My Hand....
aap sab ka bohat shukriya!
wah yeh hiana maze ki
perfect laging i ko tu
sar jee he bata sakte hian mistakes
bohat shukriya naz ji
zaberdast hai janab
v nice...
wah
bht zbrdst hai