shairy seekhiye, sabaq 2

[ishtiaq zain]

ASLAAM O ALEKUM,
Hasb-e-wa.ada Shaairy seekhiye ke doosarey mazmoon ke saath haazir hoon,umeed karta hoon ke yeh mazmoon bhi aap ke liye kaar aamad saabat ho ga,

jin dostoN ne pehla mazmoon miss kar diya hai,woh neechey diye gaye link par click kar ke woh mazmoon paR saktey haiN,

link yeh raha......

Shairy seekhiye,sabaq 1. - .:.Sachii Dosti Community.:.

shuroo kartey hain aaj ka yeh mazmoon,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[Hijaab]

Walekam-Aslam
Bohat umda Zain Sahab!
MASHALLAH, sikhanay ka andaza bohat he saada aur asan feham hai!
Baar baar parnay aur samjhnay kay baad INSHALLAH bohat achi taran seekh jayen gey!

Question:
"Kia WAZAN(behar) ko baad mein explain karein gey?"
I mean kay apnay aglay mazameen mein!

[ishtiaq zain]

Walekam-Aslam
Bohat umda Zain Sahab!
MASHALLAH, sikhanay ka andaza bohat he saada aur asan feham hai!
Baar baar parnay aur samjhnay kay baad INSHALLAH bohat achi taran seekh jayen gey!

Question:
"Kia WAZAN(behar) ko baad mein explain karein gey?"
I mean kay apnay aglay mazameen mein!

bahot shukriya Hijab saahiba,is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
ji haan,INSHA ALLAH, zindagi ne saath diya to agla mazmoon behar/wazn,aor taqtee ke baarey main ho ga,

bahot khush rahiye,

[zeest]

bohat khoob zain .. bohat achha tutorial hai .. umeed hai ham sab bohat kuch seekhain gay .. kion kay sikhany wala aap jasia ho to jahil say jahil bhee bohat seekh jaye ga .. ham to phir mashaAllah kafi zaheen hain

[~*Rano*~]

ji ustad ji me nay perh liya hai....



wo behar kaya hota hai


or jo azaad nazam hoti hai....us main b lafz milnay chahiye means k nazam main kahin kahin...lafz hum wazan honay chahiye kaya...jisay milyan rolayien bataien....etc?


me hemsha nazamien he likhti hon..so ap ka yeh lesson me ko buhat acha laga..

[ishtiaq zain]

bohat khoob zain .. bohat achha tutorial hai .. umeed hai ham sab bohat kuch seekhain gay .. kion kay sikhany wala aap jasia ho to jahil say jahil bhee bohat seekh jaye ga .. ham to phir mashaAllah kafi zaheen hain

bahot shukriya Zeest saahiba,
bas ab jaldi se is mazmoon ko hifz kar lijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,

[ishtiaq zain]

ji ustad ji me nay perh liya hai....



wo behar kaya hota hai


or jo azaad nazam hoti hai....us main b lafz milnay chahiye means k nazam main kahin kahin...lafz hum wazan honay chahiye kaya...jisay milyan rolayien bataien....etc?


me hemsha nazamien he likhti hon..so ap ka yeh lesson me ko buhat acha laga..

bahot shukriya Dua saahiba,

behar.....fiqrey,ya misrey ki us makhsoos lambaayi ko kehtey hain,jis ke mutaabiq,ghazal,sheir qitta,ke baaqi sab misrey kahey (likhey) jaatey haiN,
aap ko bahot aasaan alfaaz main samjhaaun to ,yoon kahoon ga ke.....jab ham koyi misra,ya jumla,ya fiqra likhtey hain to us ki jitni lambaayi hoti hai,us ko misrey ka wazn,ya behar kehtey hain,aor phir us ghazal,ya nazam ke baaqi tamaam misrey ussi lambaayi ke mutaabiq likhtey hain,INSHA ALLAH agla mazmoon issi ke baarey main ho ga,so aap is mazmoon ko baghor paRiye,samjhiye,INSHA ALLAH agley mazmoon main aap ko behar/wazn bhi samajh aa jaaye ga,

aazaad nazam ki jo ta.areef mazmoon main likhi hai,us ko baghor paRiye,ussi main 2 mukhtalif misaalain bhi di haiN,un par bhi ghor kijiye,aap bahot aasaani se samajh jaayain gi,
bahot khush rahiye,

[zeest]

bahot shukriya Zeest saahiba,
bas ab jaldi se is mazmoon ko hifz kar lijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,

haan jee hifz to ho gaya hai abb sawalon ka intizaar hai

[~*Rano*~]

me nay perh liya hai

a gayi hai me ko samhj...


ab me say sawal poucho zara ..

[Rani]

ustad ji, aapka mazmoon samjhnay mein be-hadh assani rahi hai

aap nay bohat achay aur asaan tareeqay say samjhaanay ki koshish ki hai

mera sawal jo azad nazam k baray mein tha wo toh khair meri jurwan behn Dua nay pooch liya hai jawab k liye be-hadh shukriya

mera rujhan khas tor par nasari aur azam nazam pe hota hai. iss hawalay say mera aik sawal yeh hai k:

kiya nasari nazam ki hadood muqrarr hein? mera matlab hai k nasari nazam ki lambai kitni honay chahiye?

bohat shukriya