Nazam Competition of the Month May 2008

[~*~Mehar~*~]

Salam friends

Is month ka competion Mother's Day kay hwaly say hain to Is thread may Aaap ko apni likhi hoi nazam share kerny hain.. jo maa ky bary may ho...!!

winner Ko award sy nwaza jaye ga


21May ko thread close ho jaye ga or phir polling ho gi


Aik member aik hi nazam share ker skta hy


Aap ki achi achi poetry ka intzaar rhay ga

[ishtiaq zain]

WALEKUM ASLAAM,

bahot achha maozu hai,yaqeenan bahot kuchh likha ja sakta hai is par,
aor yaqeenan bahot hi khoobsurat kaawishaat paRney ko milain gi is baar,
ab dekhtey haiN kon kitna achha likhta hai,
chalo bacho,aa jaao sab jaldi se maidaan main,

[Hijaab]

Walekam-Aslam!
bohat acha topic hai dear

[zeest]

Bohat achha topic hai...zain sahab aap na ana maidaan main plzzz...wrna hamara aiward ka chanc mara jay ga

[ishtiaq zain]

Bohat achha topic hai...zain sahab aap na ana maidaan main plzzz...wrna hamara aiward ka chanc mara jay ga

ghabraaney ka bilkul bhi naheen hai Zeest,mera filhaal aesa koyi iraada naheen hai,
ab is se pehley ke mera iraada badal jaaye,jaldi se aek achhi si tehreer likh ke post kar do,

[zeest]

[~*Rano*~]

yeh poem me nay likhi...me nay 1st tym apni mama k liye kuch likha hai...i dont kaya or kaisa likha hai bas jo jo zehan main ata gaya likhti gayi........

[ishtiaq zain]

yeh poem me nay likhi...me nay 1st tym apni mama k liye kuch likha hai...i dont kaya or kaisa likha hai bas jo jo zehan main ata gaya likhti gayi........

bahot khoob Dua,bahot hi khoobsurat jazboN ko,be had sachaayi se alfaaz ka roop diya hai aap ne,jissey par ke bahot achha laga,aor agar shaairy ke asool o zawaabat se haT kar sirf jazboN ko dekha jaaye to aap dheron mubaarak baad ki haqdaar haiN,ke aap un jazboN ka poori shiddat se izhaar karney main kaamyaab rahi haiN,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

wah bhot khubsuart

FeamNAllah

[naz]

MashAllah Dua bhot acha likha hai.yeh jazba hai he aisa ke is main bus likhte he chale jaye jab qalam uthey.