ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

[ishtiaq zain]

Aehl-e-mefil ki khidmat main Aadaab,
apni aek aor ghazal paish kar raha hoon,umeed hai pasand aaye gi,
apni bahot qeemati aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Rani]

adab zain sahb

wah wah, kiya baat hai janab zaberdast as usual

dil ko khak honay say kab bacha saka koi
aag dil lagi ki yeh kab bujhi bujhaanay say

bohat he zaberdast

wesay aik word ki samjh nahi ayi, plz isska matlab samjha dein gay

iss meray gronday k loag toh adu'hi thay

if am not pronounsing it wrong, toh iss adhu'hi ka matlab kia hai?

by the way, aapki designing kafi achi hoti ja rahi hai

when r u gonna teach me?

hamesha khush rahein

[ishtiaq zain]

adab zain sahb

wah wah, kiya baat hai janab zaberdast as usual

dil ko khak honay say kab bacha saka koi
aag dil lagi ki yeh kab bujhi bujhaanay say

bohat he zaberdast

wesay aik word ki samjh nahi ayi, plz isska matlab samjha dein gay

iss meray gronday k loag toh adu'hi thay

if am not pronounsing it wrong, toh iss adhu'hi ka matlab kia hai?

by the way, aapki designing kafi achi hoti ja rahi hai

when r u gonna teach me?

hamesha khush rahein

bahot shukriya Raani saahiba,is hosala afzaayi aor pazeeraayi ke liye,

adu....ka matlab hai dushman,.....adu hi the,..yehni dushman hi the,
desingning pehley main khud to seekh loon,phir aap ko bhi zaroor sikha doon ga,
wesey pehley shaairy to seekh lo na,desinging baad ki baat hai,
bahot khush rahiye,

[~*zaib*~]

boht hi khobsurat

[ishtiaq zain]

boht hi khobsurat

bahot shukriya,
aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

[dreamer]

abhi with love ki nazm ka maza layraha tha kay tumhari ghazal say dochand hogaya! yaar sach baat hay tumhari sha,iri tabdeel horahi hay.. kuch ghinaiyyet ki jo kami mahsoos huwa krti thi wo guzishta teen chaar kawishon main bilkul nazar nahi aarahi... bayintaha tarannum or lahja aamad horaha hay... zain jaani boht boht saari daad itni achi ghazal kay liye

[ishtiaq zain]

abhi with love ki nazm ka maza layraha tha kay tumhari ghazal say dochand hogaya! yaar sach baat hay tumhari sha,iri tabdeel horahi hay.. kuch ghinaiyyet ki jo kami mahsoos huwa krti thi wo guzishta teen chaar kawishon main bilkul nazar nahi aarahi... bayintaha tarannum or lahja aamad horaha hay... zain jaani boht boht saari daad itni achi ghazal kay liye

bahot shukriya Zubair,is qadar pazeeraayi ke liye,tumaari aara hamesha hi bahot hosala deti hai,aor mazeed achha likhney ki tehreek paida karti hai,

arrey yaar,kiyoon mazaaq kartey ho,yeh ghazal to bahot puraani hai,balke jab baaqaaida wazn main likhna shuru kiya tha,tab ki hai,aaj kal to jam.ood taari hai,alfaaz naraaz haiN,aor khayalaat muntashir.
beharhaal,bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[Hijaab]

Adaab!
dil shakastgi ko ab, tum chupayo gey kaisay?
raaz khul gaya sara, Zain larkhranay say.
bohat he umda shair hai!

overall, sari ghazal he bohat khoob hai!

[ishtiaq zain]

Adaab!
dil shakastgi ko ab, tum chupayo gey kaisay?
raaz khul gaya sara, Zain larkhranay say.
bohat he umda shair hai!

overall, sari ghazal he bohat khoob hai!

bahot shukriya Hijab,
khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[zeest]

Aehl-e-mefil ki khidmat main Aadaab,
apni aek aor ghazal paish kar raha hoon,umeed hai pasand aaye gi,
apni bahot qeemati aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,
bahot khush rahiye,

Dil shikastagi ko abb ,tum chupao gay kaisay?
Raaz khul gaya sara Zain lar-kharany say



bohat hi khoob maza aa gaya zain
Allah aur karay shou-e-qalam zayada