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  1. 01-05-2008, 11:28 PM #1
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    Default ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Aehl-e-mefil ki khidmat main Aadaab,
    apni aek aor ghazal paish kar raha hoon,umeed hai pasand aaye gi,
    apni bahot qeemati aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,



    ghazal 3teergi musallat ha - ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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  2. 02-05-2008, 01:58 AM #2
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    adab zain sahb

    wah wah, kiya baat hai janab zaberdast as usual

    dil ko khak honay say kab bacha saka koi
    aag dil lagi ki yeh kab bujhi bujhaanay say

    bohat he zaberdast

    wesay aik word ki samjh nahi ayi, plz isska matlab samjha dein gay

    iss meray gronday k loag toh adu'hi thay

    if am not pronounsing it wrong, toh iss adhu'hi ka matlab kia hai?

    by the way, aapki designing kafi achi hoti ja rahi hai

    when r u gonna teach me?

    hamesha khush rahein
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  3. 02-05-2008, 04:23 AM #3
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    boht hi khobsurat
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Adaab!
    dil shakastgi ko ab, tum chupayo gey kaisay?
    raaz khul gaya sara, Zain larkhranay say.
    bohat he umda shair hai!

    overall, sari ghazal he bohat khoob hai!
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post
    Aehl-e-mefil ki khidmat main Aadaab,
    apni aek aor ghazal paish kar raha hoon,umeed hai pasand aaye gi,
    apni bahot qeemati aara se zaroor nawaaziye ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,



    ghazal 3teergi musallat ha - ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....
    Dil shikastagi ko abb ,tum chupao gay kaisay?
    Raaz khul gaya sara Zain lar-kharany say



    bohat hi khoob maza aa gaya zain
    Allah aur karay shou-e-qalam zayada
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Bhot umda Zain

    FeamnAllah
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aap ne
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    buhat umdha .............
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  9. 04-05-2008, 10:25 PM #9
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    adab zain sahb

    wah wah, kiya baat hai janab zaberdast as usual

    dil ko khak honay say kab bacha saka koi
    aag dil lagi ki yeh kab bujhi bujhaanay say

    bohat he zaberdast

    wesay aik word ki samjh nahi ayi, plz isska matlab samjha dein gay

    iss meray gronday k loag toh adu'hi thay

    if am not pronounsing it wrong, toh iss adhu'hi ka matlab kia hai?

    by the way, aapki designing kafi achi hoti ja rahi hai

    when r u gonna teach me?

    hamesha khush rahein
    bahot shukriya Raani saahiba,is hosala afzaayi aor pazeeraayi ke liye,

    adu....ka matlab hai dushman,.....adu hi the,..yehni dushman hi the,
    desingning pehley main khud to seekh loon,phir aap ko bhi zaroor sikha doon ga,
    wesey pehley shaairy to seekh lo na,desinging baad ki baat hai,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*zaib*~ View Post
    boht hi khobsurat
    bahot shukriya,
    aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN
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