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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Adaab!
    dil shakastgi ko ab, tum chupayo gey kaisay?
    raaz khul gaya sara, Zain larkhranay say.
    bohat he umda shair hai!

    overall, sari ghazal he bohat khoob hai!
    bahot shukriya Hijab,
    khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by zeest View Post
    Dil shikastagi ko abb ,tum chupao gay kaisay?
    Raaz khul gaya sara Zain lar-kharany say



    bohat hi khoob maza aa gaya zain
    Allah aur karay shou-e-qalam zayada

    bahot shukriya Zeest,

    wesey yeh shou-qalam kaya hota hai,

    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain View Post
    Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

    Bhot umda Zain

    FeamnAllah
    bahot shukriya janaab is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by Wasi Anjum View Post
    Bahoot khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aap ne

    bahot shukriya Wasi,
    aap ki aara ka aainda bhi intazaar rahey ga,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by asif shahzad View Post
    buhat umdha .............
    thanx Asif,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Quote Originally Posted by zain View Post

    bahot shukriya Zeest,

    wesey yeh shou-qalam kaya hota hai,

    bahot khush rahiye,
    mra matlab thaa shouq-e-Qalam

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    wahhhh.. bohat khoob.. bari achi ghazal kahi .. pasand aayee.. dhairo'n daad qabool kijiye.. aur dil ki shikastgi to suna hai .. magar dil shikastgi nahi .. kya ye waqai mustamil hai.. ? ilm mein izafa farma ker Shukria ka moqa dijiye..Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
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    koitaveezho - ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    wahhhh.. bohat khoob.. bari achi ghazal kahi .. pasand aayee.. dhairo'n daad qabool kijiye.. aur dil ki shikastgi to suna hai .. magar dil shikastgi nahi .. kya ye waqai mustamil hai.. ? ilm mein izafa farma ker Shukria ka moqa dijiye..Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove

    bahot shukriya bhahi is hosala afzaayi ke liye,

    dilshikasta..........faarsi ka lafz hai,aor sifft hai,.....aor is ke maeni... ranjeeda,afsurda,mayoos,...ke haiN,.......dil shikastgi ko main ne ..maayoosi ...ke manoN main istamaal kiya hai,aor merey khayaal main is main kuchh harj naheen,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    ji bilkul herj nahi .. aur bilkul yaad aa gaya.. balkay shaad lakhnwi ka eik misra bhi yaad aa gaya..

    wabastgi se ghum ki ye dil'shikastagi hai

    zehmat ki maazrat.. Nawazish
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    koitaveezho - ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    .....JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN.....

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    Default Re: ghazal,teergi musallat hai dil pe....

    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    ji bilkul herj nahi .. aur bilkul yaad aa gaya.. balkay shaad lakhnwi ka eik misra bhi yaad aa gaya..

    wabastgi se ghum ki ye dil'shikastagi hai

    zehmat ki maazrat.. Nawazish
    arrey naheen yaar,kiyoon sharminda kartey ho,is main bhala zehmat kesi?
    mujhey khushi hai ke aap meri tehreeroN ko itni tawajah detey haiN,
    bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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