dard jagaaiy barish nay

**dreamer** · 02-05-2008, 03:29 PM

ye ghazal kisi zamanay main boht mohabbt say kahi thi...ye meri wahid ghazal hay jis kay baray main az raah e maa iltimaas krta hon k is ki tareef hi kijiye ga.. mera dil chahta hay kay aap is ghazal ki boht ziyada tareef karain.. main hamesha khud pe tanqeed pasand krta hon magr.....!

**Bheegi-Palkain** · 02-05-2008, 04:59 PM

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Agr aap Tareef ka na bhi khaty tab bhi mai tareef hi karta , is liya nahi k aap aur mai aik hi jagha hay balky is liya k aap nay jo Ghazal kahi hay mujhy khud aap nay mazi mai phoncha diya aur her shair asa laga jasy k mujh per likha gya hoon ,

Bhot shukriya itni khubsuart Ghazal paish karnay ka

FeamnAllah

**dreamer** · 05-05-2008, 07:11 PM

Originally Posted by Bheegi-Palkain

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Agr aap Tareef ka na bhi khaty tab bhi mai tareef hi karta , is liya nahi k aap aur mai aik hi jagha hay balky is liya k aap nay jo Ghazal kahi hay mujhy khud aap nay mazi mai phoncha diya aur her shair asa laga jasy k mujh per likha gya hoon ,

Bhot shukriya itni khubsuart Ghazal paish karnay ka

FeamnAllah

boht boht shukriya ziya...yoon samjh lo kay tum pr hi likhi hay

maazi ki kuch sair to krwaao hamain bhi...!
boht boht shukriya is tareef or hosla afazae ka! sada khush raho

**Wasi Anjum** · 02-05-2008, 07:48 PM

BAhoot khoob janab achha likha hai

**dreamer** · 05-05-2008, 07:13 PM

Originally Posted by Wasi Anjum

BAhoot khoob janab achha likha hai

boht shukriya janab! aap jesay achay sha,ir ki midahat qabili zuam hay

**Hijaab** · 02-05-2008, 08:57 PM

Assalamo-Alekam Sir Ji!
Yaqeen maniye hamein khud barish had say ziada pasand hai aur yahan rehtey huey tou is janoon ko taskeen bhi mil jaati hai

Hum nay bohat dafa chaha kay barish mein kuch likhein, lekin abhi tak kamyaab nahi huay!
Behtreen shayri her parnay walay ko mutasir karti hai aur shayri cheez he aise hai jo insan kay jazbaat ki tarjumani karti hai.
Moun boli tareef nahi hai, aap nay bohat he umda ghazal kahe hai, aik aik lafz bohat he gherayi aur apnaiyat say likha gaya hai!
Hamein parh ker bohat he acha laga!
Hamesha aisa he acha likhety rahiye aur hum say zaroor share kijeay!
Hamesha khush rahiye

**dreamer** · 05-05-2008, 07:18 PM

Originally Posted by Hijab

Assalamo-Alekam Sir Ji!
Yaqeen maniye hamein khud barish had say ziada pasand hai aur yahan rehtey huey tou is janoon ko taskeen bhi mil jaati hai

Hum nay bohat dafa chaha kay barish mein kuch likhein, lekin abhi tak kamyaab nahi huay!
Behtreen shayri her parnay walay ko mutasir karti hai aur shayri cheez he aise hai jo insan kay jazbaat ki tarjumani karti hai.
Moun boli tareef nahi hai, aap nay bohat he umda ghazal kahe hai, aik aik lafz bohat he gherayi aur apnaiyat say likha gaya hai!
Hamein parh ker bohat he acha laga!
Hamesha aisa he acha likhety rahiye aur hum say zaroor share kijeay!
Hamesha khush rahiye

boht boht shukriya hijaab sahiba..aap nay to itni pasandeedgi or tareef ka izhaar kiya hay kay meri samjh hi nahi aaraha kay kis tarha shukriya ada keron! janab aap ki jitni bhi sha,iri main parhchuka hon wo mery liye hayran kun hay....yaqeenan aap boht achi sha,ira hain.. aik iittla ye dayni thi kay imla ka imtihani parcha laga huwa hay usay hal karain..
aap ka boht boht hi shukriya