dard jagaaiy barish nay

[dreamer]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Agr aap Tareef ka na bhi khaty tab bhi mai tareef hi karta , is liya nahi k aap aur mai aik hi jagha hay balky is liya k aap nay jo Ghazal kahi hay mujhy khud aap nay mazi mai phoncha diya aur her shair asa laga jasy k mujh per likha gya hoon ,

Bhot shukriya itni khubsuart Ghazal paish karnay ka

FeamnAllah

boht boht shukriya ziya...yoon samjh lo kay tum pr hi likhi hay maazi ki kuch sair to krwaao hamain bhi...!
boht boht shukriya is tareef or hosla afazae ka! sada khush raho

[dreamer]

BAhoot khoob janab achha likha hai

boht shukriya janab! aap jesay achay sha,ir ki midahat qabili zuam hay

[dreamer]

Assalamo-Alekam Sir Ji!
Yaqeen maniye hamein khud barish had say ziada pasand hai aur yahan rehtey huey tou is janoon ko taskeen bhi mil jaati hai
Hum nay bohat dafa chaha kay barish mein kuch likhein, lekin abhi tak kamyaab nahi huay!
Behtreen shayri her parnay walay ko mutasir karti hai aur shayri cheez he aise hai jo insan kay jazbaat ki tarjumani karti hai.
Moun boli tareef nahi hai, aap nay bohat he umda ghazal kahe hai, aik aik lafz bohat he gherayi aur apnaiyat say likha gaya hai!
Hamein parh ker bohat he acha laga!
Hamesha aisa he acha likhety rahiye aur hum say zaroor share kijeay!
Hamesha khush rahiye

boht boht shukriya hijaab sahiba..aap nay to itni pasandeedgi or tareef ka izhaar kiya hay kay meri samjh hi nahi aaraha kay kis tarha shukriya ada keron! janab aap ki jitni bhi sha,iri main parhchuka hon wo mery liye hayran kun hay....yaqeenan aap boht achi sha,ira hain.. aik iittla ye dayni thi kay imla ka imtihani parcha laga huwa hay usay hal karain..
aap ka boht boht hi shukriya

[withlove]

Aaj nagar mein deir talak barsaat huee
mere haal pe ashk bahaye barish ney

wahhhhh.. kya kehny.. kya achi musalsal ghazal kahi.. ji maazrat ke hum itnay achay nahi ke sirf tareef keren.. agar aap ne koi gunjayesh chori hoti to zaroor tanqeed kertay.. bohat si daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

[ishtiaq zain]

kamaal hai,yahaan se bhi mera reply ghaaib,
yeh chakar kaya hai yaar,
modsssssssss.........koyi bataaye ga yeh kaya ho raha hai merey saath?

kher dubara se reply kar deta hoon,.......

to janaab Zubair saahib aap ki ghazal hamain be had pasand aayi hai,har aek sheir,aek aek lafz,daad o tehseen ka haq daar hai,aor aap is khoobsurat ghazal ke khaaliq honey ke naatey mubaarak baad ke,itni achhi ghazal kehney par yeh phool aap ka huwa,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

[dreamer]

Aaj nagar mein deir talak barsaat huee
mere haal pe ashk bahaye barish ney

wahhhhh.. kya kehny.. kya achi musalsal ghazal kahi.. ji maazrat ke hum itnay achay nahi ke sirf tareef keren.. agar aap ne koi gunjayesh chori hoti to zaroor tanqeed kertay.. bohat si daad hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

janab e man kyon sharminda krtay ho yaar...mujhay pata hay kay main kitnay pani ka sha,ir hon, abhi pani takhno tak hi hay,tairnay ki nobat to door ki baat hay...boht boht shukriya with love boht piyar kay sath

[dreamer]

kamaal hai,yahaan se bhi mera reply ghaaib,
yeh chakar kaya hai yaar,
modsssssssss.........koyi bataaye ga yeh kaya ho raha hai merey saath?

kher dubara se reply kar deta hoon,.......

to janaab Zubair saahib aap ki ghazal hamain be had pasand aayi hai,har aek sheir,aek aek lafz,daad o tehseen ka haq daar hai,aor aap is khoobsurat ghazal ke khaaliq honey ke naatey mubaarak baad ke,itni achhi ghazal kehney par yeh phool aap ka huwa,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,

aray huzoor,chashm e baddor, baray huzoor,dil ka suroor, shaa,ir e tabaan,Sahib e khooban ye aapka phool sar aankhon pr nahi balkay sar e mizgaan rakh liya hay... boht boht shukriya zain ji

[uzair]

NICE JI

[naz]

yaha tu bol ke tarif karwaye jarahe hai kiya baat hai jee ap ki

[εïз˚Enchantress˚εïз]

aaaaaaaaaa ali bhai boht khoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOb

kya kehne