Khawab Dekhnay Lagey Hein!

[Hijaab]

Assalamo-Alekam!
4 months pehlay likhi thi yeh ghazal, jab hamein poetry kay ramouz ka bilkul nahi pata tha!
Yeh hamaray mood kay bilkul ber-aks hai, just a poetry, No Offense!

Yeh pata nahi Inpage mein likhtey huey kuch mistake ho gaye
dou lines nazar nahi aa rahi thi, hum nay Roman mein add ker di hein

Hum bhi fazayon mein urnay lagay hein
nam ankh tou rehti thi her pal he

[ur_friend]

v.nice

[withlove]

khayalat achay hein.. daad qabool kijiye.. main koi shayer to nahi.. chota monh bari baat..magar ghazal parh ker ahsaas hua ke 4 saal purani hogi.. rawani ki kafi kami rahi .. ho sakay to nazar sani kjiye.. ghazal niker jaye gi.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove

[Hijaab]

bohat bohat nawaizsh
koshish zaroor karien gey ji

[Rani]

wow, zaberdast

bohat acha likha hai Hijab

[~*Rano*~]

buhat he khoobsurat likha hai hijab jani..

[asif shahzad]

buhat umdha janab........

[dreamer]

BOHT hi umda kiya baat hay..kiya kahnay hain hijaab... tum to chaagae ho idhar boht saari daad ! or boht saari toaseef! aik misray main`` lafzon men likhna`` ki jaga ``lafzon men kahna`` hojaiy to ye khoobsorat misra or khobsorat hojaiyga ... boht sari daad aap kay liye hijaab!

[ishtiaq zain]

bahot khoob Hijab,bahot achhi koshish hai yeh bhi,so daad qabool kijiye,
issi tarah mashq jaari rakhiye,INSHA ALLAH mazeed behtari aaye gi kalaam main,
bahot khush rahiye,

[Hijaab]

sab ka bohat bohat shukriya'
aap ki tanqeed aur mashwaron ki bohat zaroorat hoti hai
aap sab kay bohat mashkoor hein