**Poora Dukh aur Aadhi Raat**

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wah bohat zaberdast

bohat hi achi nazam likhi hai aap ne

keep it up dear

aap ki pasendeedgi ka Behad shuker'guzar hon.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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wow, zaberdast janab

Bohat Shukria janab

wafa aur dua ke saath
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wow, bohat he khoob
zabardast kawish

Bohat hi Shukria.. Nawazish

wafa aur dua ke saath
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wah kaya he kehnay..


zaberdast

aap ki hosla afzai ka mamnoon hon .. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

wah bhot khubsuart

FeamNAllah

Bohat Shukria janab.. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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wha kia batt hi buhat umdha nazam hi

is hosla afzai ka Behad Shukria..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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aik martaba nahi do martaba nahi chaar martaba nazm parhi hay.. or yaqeen jano kay itni taweel nazm ko baar parhtay hoaiy kaheen bhi nazar nahi chooki,na dil tha kay pehlo main rahta!
aisa khoobsoorat samaan bandha hay saahb kay jawaab naheen, misray kay sath misray ka tasalsul,rabt,or nazm ki bunat say kaheen bhi mahsoos nahi huwa kay kareegari ki gae hay...bilkul aamad thi..poori ki poori nazm aamad thi sirf is nazm main teen misray mujhay lagay jin ki aamad aawurd ki mohtaaj hoee... wo misray main likhta hon tum batana kay ye bhi aamad hi hay ya is main kuch kaarkhan e zahn ka dakhal bhi hay,misray ye hen
``janay tum nay kiya kiya guman palay hen``
``tabassum ka diya rakha hay``
``meray dukh ki meead koan janay``
ye misray nihayet khoobsorat hain...poori nazm boht tareef kay laaiq hay..or ye itni tareef is liye nahi hay kay pichli nazm pr tanqeed ki thi, ye waqaee boht umda namoona e izhaar hay... jitni marzi daad layna chahain laysaktay ho.

yaqeenan aap ne humen khareed liya.. qeemat hi itni laga di ke aap ke khaloos haton bikna para.. Behad Shukria.. warna khaksar kis liaq hai aap bakhoobi janty hein.. aur ye sab ki sab bus eik khas kafiyat thi jo waraq per utaar di.. baqi aap ka husn-e-nazar hai .. Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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ap ko kuch kehna aisa hai ke hum kuch keh he nahi rahe..

bus aap ki inayat hai aur to kuch bhi nahi .. aap ka azhad mamnoon hon.. Bohat Nawazish..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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arrey wahhh!!!!!!!!!
yeh woh lafz hai jo nazam paRtey saath hi be ikhtiyaar hontoN se ada huwa,
nazam kaya hai,aek behta huwa dariya hai,jo parney waaley ko apne saath,door,bahot door tak baha le jaata hai,aor behney waaley ko aehsaas tak naheen hota,
sach to yeh hai ke is qadar khoobsurat nazam ki ta.areef ke liye merey paas alfaaz naheen haiN,so sirf mubaarak baad se kaam chalaata hoon,ke itni khoobsurat nazam kehney par aap yaqeenan daad o tehseen,aor mubaarak baad ke haq daar haiN,
bahot khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye,likhtey aor ham se share kartey rahiye,

janab-e-ishtiaq aap se sahib-e-ilm ki aisi tareef .. yaqeen mujhe maghroor ker dey gi.. jabke ye sab to aap se seekh seekh hi likhty hein.. Behad Nawazish.. ke aap ne na sirf waqt nikala.. bulkay nazm ko parha, parkha aur saraha bhi..

wafa aur dua ke saath
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