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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    wahh wahh janab.. kya baaat hai .. bari achi ghazal hai .. MashaAllah.. daad-o-mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.. Nawazish..

    chota monh bari baat: maqta ke pehly misry mein lafz bazam nahi bazm hota hai .. choonky wazn lafz bazam parhny se poora hota hai .. so is lehaz se socha ke aap ne isay bazam parha hoga.. gustakhi dar'guzer kijiye ga..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove
    bahot shukriya bhahi is pazeerayi aor hosala afzaayi ke liye,
    be had mamnoon hoon ke aap ne meri tehreer ko itni tawajah bakhshi,aor ghalti ki nishaandahi ki,mujhey aap ki baat se bilkul itefaaq hai,aor is ghalti ka aehsaas bhi huwa tha jab yeh ghazal kahi thi,leken jab aehsaas huwa to note book main to taseeh kar li thi,lekin inpage main is ko tabdeel karna bhool gaya,so bahot achha huwa ke aap ne is tarf tawajah dila di,main abhi is ko edit karta hoon,
    aap ki muhabbaton ke liye aek baar phir be had mamnoon hooN,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*~Mehar~*~ View Post
    wah kia baat hai

    hmsha ki terha bht bht bht khoobsurt gazal hai

    akhri shair mjy b bht acha laga

    be had mamnoon hooN Mehar saahiba,is pazeeraayi ke liye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    wah buhat he khoobsurat..
    be had mamnoon hooN Dua,is hosala afzaayi ke liye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,muddat ke baad guzrey jo us ki gali se ham

    bahot shukriya Naz,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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