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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    last wala tu

    mehfil lout le janab ne

    thanxxxxxxxxxxxx Naz.
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Quote Originally Posted by withlove View Post
    Sukh usi ke sab huye, dukh sabhi mere liye
    uljhanen sulajh gayee'n, sab hisaab ho gaye

    wahhh.. janab-e-ishtiaq.. kya hi kehnay.. tamam tar ghazal umdah ashaar liye.. lutf aa gaya.. maqta to khoob hi kaha.. mundarja bala shair eik mukamal takhleeq hai .. dhairo'n daad-o-mubarakbaad iss kamyabi ki nazr.. Bohat Nawazish..

    wafa aur dua ke saath
    withlove
    bahot shukriya bhahi ,is pazeeraayi ke liye,
    wesey aap ghaaib kahaan ho aaj kal?
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Quote Originally Posted by Hijab View Post
    Walekam-Aslam
    waisay tou aap ki sari ghazal he behtreen hoti hai
    lekin kuch ashar bohat he umda hotye hein
    jaisay is ghazal ka last shair
    bahot shukriya Hijab,is pazeeraayi ke liye,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Dua*~ View Post
    wah hemsha ki tarhan buhat he khoobsurat...

    bahot shukriya Dua,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Quote Originally Posted by Đŕeåmẹr View Post
    kiya kahnay hain zain jaani kiya baat hay tumhari...
    ik kiran mang kr wo aaftaab hogaiy..... mery khiyal se ye misra aisa hay kay is se aagay ghazal kiya parhi jaaiy... is misray ko sanbhal kr rakhna zain ji,,kuch share shanasi hay hamain,,ye her zuban zad e aam honay wala misra hay... kiya baat hay yaar
    tum khud is ghazal ko parho aik martaba meray kahnay se.... ye misra poori ghazal pr bhaari nazar aaiy ga...kiya kahnay hain yaar
    ik kiran maang kr wo aaftab hogaiy....wah wah..subhanAllah

    be had mamnoon hoon Zubair bhahi,is pazeeraayi ke liye,
    wesey kuchh ziyaada hi oonchaayi pe naheen bitha diya tum ne,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by asif shahzad View Post
    wha all shair is good buhat umdha .......

    bahot shukriya Asif,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Quote Originally Posted by Rani View Post
    too good!
    bahot shukriya Rani,
    aaj kal poet club main haazari bahot kam ho gayi hai aap ki,khaas tor se shaairy seekhiye thread main,sab theek hai na,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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    Default Re: ghazal,ik kiran woh maang kar........

    Quote Originally Posted by ~*~Mehar~*~ View Post


    bht bht acha likha zain app nay
    bahot shukriya Mehar,
    bahot khush rahiye,
    Dastaar beich kar maiN bachaauN jo Zain sar
    hai aarzoo-e-zeest, magar is qadar naheeN


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