Shairs " Dil ki Choton ne Chain se rehne na diya"

[R. M. Dixit]

Pesha khidmet hai
" dil ki choton ne kaabhi chain se rehne na diya,
jaab chali shard hawa main tume yaad kiya.
Is ka rona nahin ki tumne dil barbaad kiya,
is ka hai gum ki bari der se barbaad kiya "
" udhar balon main kanghi ho rahi khum nikalta hai,

idher reh reh ker khich khich ke hamara dum nikalta hai.

Ilahi kher ho ulghen pe ulghen barti jati hai'
na unka khum nikalta hai na hamara dum
nikelta hai"
" irada tha terke - muhabet ( end of love) ka lekin, farebe tabussem main phir aagaye
hum. Abhi kha ke thoker sambhel bhi na payee, ki phir khayi thoker sambhelte sabhelte"

r. M. Dixit

[Arslan]

inko aik proper direction mein likh dayte tau easy hojata k kahan py end hai aik shair ka

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[R. M. Dixit]

inko aik proper direction mein likh dayte tau easy hojata k kahan py end hai aik shair ka

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HI Arslan Miyan, Thanks for your sugestation I typed all three shares Seperately one after another in a proper way. Uper pehla sher. Uske baad gap de ke dusra share phir teesara. They have presented in the form of Paragraph. Thanks again.

[Arslan]

in 3no ko seperate threads mein q nahi posts karte???

[suhaney_khawab]

[R. M. Dixit]

inko aik proper direction mein likh dayte tau easy hojata k kahan py end hai aik shair ka

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Janab, Maine koshish Sheron ko Seperate kerne per na ho saka. Actually their display mode he defective hai. Aapn dekhna aabhi shers ka display kuch improve ker diya hai . Is baabet kisko approach kare. Please guide me am new one. Thanks! Can U giv me your E.mail ID? Mine dr.mrrmdixit@rediffmail.com r m dixit

[Sky Angel]

nice

[Arslan]

u can ask anything via pm r vm..

Regards

[naz]

nice....