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  1. 01-10-2009, 12:23 AM #1
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    snow ~aaj ka shair ~ 14-11-09

    Is kadar tera tassavur kabhi barh jaata hai
    Ke zarray zarray mein tera aks nazar aata hai
    Teri mehfil mein pohanchne ko pohanch tu jaon magar
    Teri ruswai ka reh reh kar khayal aata hai
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    2m4ccw6 - ~aaj ka shair ~ 14-11-09

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  3. 14-11-2009, 02:17 AM #3
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    Default Re: ~aaj ka shair ~ 14-11-09

    very nice!
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  4. 14-11-2009, 02:26 AM #4
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    Default Re: ~aaj ka shair ~ 14-11-09

    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا
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  5. 14-11-2009, 04:25 PM #5
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    cute Re: ~aaj ka shair ~ 14-11-09

    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    Is kadar tera tassavur kabhi barh jaata hai

    Ke zarray zarray mein tera aks nazar aata hai
    Teri mehfil mein pohanchne ko pohanch tu jaon magar
    Teri ruswai ka reh reh kar khayal aata hai


    Bahut khub Naz , tumne shair pesh kiya. 'Mehfil main teri rusvai ka khyal aata hai.' Kabile tarif. Pl. Jara gaur karen: "Mehfil main jel uthi shama perwane ke liye Preet bani hai duniya main mer jane ke liye.. Khudahafiz.
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