**Beety Lamhain**

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o_Alikum WR WB

Specially Naz n Sameera sy guzarish hay k apni ray ka izhar Tanqeed-o-Islah sy karay

FeamNAllah

[dreamer]

hmmm acha hay,,mushkil kaam hay tazkeer say khiyalaat ko tanees main dhaalna,, boht jazbaati or dard e dil say labraiz khoobsoorat tahreer lagi,,well

[naz]

hmm...ap tu itna acha likhne lag gaye hain..MashALLAH

mujhe kuch aise kaami nazar nahi arahe ke tanqed karon....kuke sub kuch hai is main...jo ap likhna chahte the.

[Bheegi-Palkain]

hmmm acha hay,,mushkil kaam hay tazkeer say khiyalaat ko tanees main dhaalna,, boht jazbaati or dard e dil say labraiz khoobsoorat tahreer lagi,,well

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

Bhot shukriya aap nay itnay khubsuart anadaz say pazarai ki , hamesha apni islah aur tanqeed ko mery liya khulaa rakhy

FeamnAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

hmm...ap tu itna acha likhne lag gaye hain..MashALLAH

mujhe kuch aise kaami nazar nahi arahe ke tanqed karon....kuke sub kuch hai is main...jo ap likhna chahte the.

Assaalma-o-Alikum WR WB

Bhot shukriya naz , acha likhny laga hoon to is mai aap logo ko cradit jata hay k aap seniors writters sy bhot seekha hay ab bhi seekhta hoon aur umeed hay hamesha tanqeed-o-islah zaroor karay gy

Pasnd ka bantha hsukriya

FeamnAllah

[naz]

Jee InshALlah