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  1. 24-01-2010, 08:39 AM #1
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    cute Shair: Dil bhi kaatil ko diya kertai hain,

    Shair for Sunday,

    Mektale -Shauk ke aadab nirale hain bahut,
    Dil bhi kaatil ko diya kerte hain sirse pehle.
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    Default Re: Shair: Dil bhi kaatil ko diya kertai hain,

    Nice
    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا
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    Default Re: Shair: Dil bhi kaatil ko diya kertai hain,

    nice.
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  4. 25-01-2010, 11:05 PM #4
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    Default Re: Shair: Dil bhi kaatil ko diya kertai hain,

    Sajid Bhaijaan,
    Kaisi guzer rahi hai aajkel?
    Bahut shukriya sher pe daad dene ka.
    Aap bhi koi unda sa kalam shair karo.
    bye bye.
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