" Kaun jeeta hai teri Julf ke Sir hone tek"

[R. M. Dixit]

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Aah ko chahie ek umra aser hone tek,
kaun jeeta hai teri julf ke sir hone tek.

Aashqi sabra taleb aur tamanna betaab
dil ka kya rang karun khoone jiger hone tek.

Humne maana ki tagaful na karoge, lekin,
khaak hojaynge hum, tumko khaber hone tek.

[naz]

nice sharing

[S_K_Princess]

wah g wah
kia khub kaha

[R. M. Dixit]

Shukriya Naz, aapne ye ek Gazal ke
teen shers read kiye aur achi daad di.
Kuch dil ko tasalli na hui. Itne maqbool
shers SD ke doston ne lagta hai pasand
na kiye . Chalo itni to rahet mili ki aapne
pasand kiye that means sare jahan ne
approve kiya. Khudahafiz.

[R. M. Dixit]

Hi SK, thannks for appreciating the
shers presented by me and offered
dilkhush daad to me. So nice of U.
U R at Bahrain. all the best.