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  1. 28-04-2010, 01:49 PM #1
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    cute Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Sukoon dil ko kabhi meherban nahin hota,
    Tumahre jaisa ager razdan nahin hota.

    Hamare dum se hain gulshan main ronke kaayem,
    na hote hum to kabhi gulistan nahin hota.

    Hamare zabbte tehmmul ki daad de zalim,
    Yun zakhem khaa ke koi shaadma nahin hota.

    Nazer se hoti hai waakif Nazer mohabbat ki,
    Zuban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin hota.

    Wo poonchte hain kahan hai derd batao,
    Batain kya unhe hum, derd kahan nahin hota.
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    Default Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    nice....
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    Mein Le Kar Bhi,

    Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
    Behter Hai...!!
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    cute Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Quote Originally Posted by seven tiles View Post
    nice....
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    Hi Seven Tiles,
    Bahut shukriya aapne
    pesh ki hui gazal ko
    pasand kiya. "nice RM g"
    Chalo koi to apna kherkhawa
    to mila. okay ST Bye Bye.
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    پھر یوں ہوا کے درد مجھے راس آ گیا
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    cute Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Quote Originally Posted by Silent Tears View Post


    Hi Sajid, Thanks for appreciating
    the Gazal by clapping which shows
    U liked it. Yes aaope thread 90 hazaar
    touch kerne wale hain, Zara aur zor lagao.
    Lage raho Sajid bhai. Bye Bye.
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    Default Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    nice gazal...
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    I may not follow
    Don’t walk behind me
    I may not lead
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    cute Re: Gazal: Juban se derde mohabbat bayan nahin....

    Quote Originally Posted by kiran zamaan View Post
    nice gazal...



    Hi Kiran, So nice of you for
    liking my presented Gazal.
    Thanks a lot and all the best.
    Hope 2 meet soon some where
    again till than Bye Bye.
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