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  1. 30-10-2010, 03:46 PM #21
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    Quote Originally Posted by Assassins View Post
    yar hai to fit magar mjhe 3rd line ka first word nahi samjh aya
    thakan likha hoa hay means tiresome...
    254311 151251481613107 100001847683469 313672 3952200 n - ~*my own poetry*~

    I am so lonely, broken angel
    I am so lonely, listen to my heart

    One and only, broken angel
    Come and save me, before I fall apart
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    aliza aap k liyay main isko roman urdu main convert kar daita hoon
    SAANS SAKIN HOI
    dil ki dharkan suntay suntay
    sehraa main ablaa pa phirtay phirtay
    thakan ko rag-o-pay main utartay utartay
    ab akhri umeed b khatam hoi
    SAANS SAKIN HOI!!!!
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    254311 151251481613107 100001847683469 313672 3952200 n - ~*my own poetry*~

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    Come and save me, before I fall apart
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    N SHAIR YE HAY

    hay arssa-e-daraaz say silsila-e-kalam kat'ta yaar-e-bevafa say
    k vo raah-e-ishq main hay tan asaaniyooun ka qail
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    v gud janab

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  5. 31-10-2010, 01:48 AM #25
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    v nice





    تیری انگلیاں میرے جسم میںیونہی لمس بن کے گڑی رہیں
    کف کوزه گر میری مان لےمجھے چاک سے نہ اتارنا
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    thanks 2 all of u!!!!
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    bohat khoob........

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  8. 31-10-2010, 05:33 PM #28
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    zabrds hay..........
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