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  1. 12-11-2010, 01:38 AM #1
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    Bh0ol ja usay ae dil...
    Uski sab yaadein...
    W0h sab jh0otay waaday...
    W0h rishay w0h naatay...
    In sab ko de bhula...
    Ya kaheen d0or ch0r aa...

    Bho0l ja usay ae dil...
    W0h barish ki b0ond0n
    nanhay katray sa tha...
    Sardi k mausam mein
    thanday jh0nkay sa tha...
    Usay dil mein na chuppa...
    Kaheen d0or ch0r aa...

    Bho0l ja usay ae dil...
    W0h thandi raat mein
    ik meetha khwaab tha...
    Aur kitaab-e-mazi ka...
    Namukkamal baab tha...
    Ussay yaad0n mein na basa...
    Kaheen do0r ch0r aa...
    Ho sakay to
    bho0l jaa usay ae dil...
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  2. 12-11-2010, 03:32 AM #2
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    acha likha hay.. very nice.. Topic to deti..

    Bho0l ja usay ae dil...
    W0h barish ki b0ond0n
    nanhay katray sa tha...

    yaha i think it should be like

    Bhool ja usay ae dil
    Woh baarish ki Boondoon ke
    Nanhay qatre sa tha

    or

    Woh baarish ki boondon jesa




    bohat achi hai, Appreciated !! keep it up
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  3. 12-11-2010, 07:08 AM #3
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    v nice
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  4. 12-11-2010, 11:25 AM #4
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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    acha likha hay.. very nice.. Topic to deti..




    yaha i think it should be like

    Bhool ja usay ae dil
    Woh baarish ki Boondoon ke
    Nanhay qatre sa tha

    or

    Woh baarish ki boondon jesa




    bohat achi hai, Appreciated !! keep it up
    its
    barish ki b0ond0n mein
    cell se p0st kara... May
    b mistyped..
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  5. 12-11-2010, 11:43 AM #5
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    Ok ..Good Hai. Keep it up
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  6. 12-11-2010, 12:19 PM #6
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    Hm. .
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  7. 12-11-2010, 03:34 PM #7
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    bhot achi hai
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    bohat achi nazam likhi hay....
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  9. 12-11-2010, 08:14 PM #9
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    nice/up
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  10. 13-11-2010, 08:24 AM #10
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    very niceee
    keep it uP


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